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Reviews For: Sleepover Confections

wonder1440
2008-01-19
ch 4,
abuseThis was cute. A few grammar problems, but the juicy stuff was there. I do love your side banter with Tory & Colin.

He needs nookie in his next story ^_^
wonder1440
2008-01-19
ch 3,
abuseSweet :p
wonder1440
2008-01-19
ch 2,
abuseGetting interesting ^_^
wonder1440
2008-01-19
ch 1,
abuseI love the running commentary you have with Tory and Colin!

^_^
Chikorita-Trainer1
2008-01-19
ch 4,
abuseAw, that was SO CUTE! Except you seem to have used more of my story for inspiriation, but whatever. It's not like I own those concepts. Anyway, good story.
Chikorita-Trainer1
2008-01-19
ch 1,
abuseUm, you totally ripped off my stpry A Dream Worth Keeping; the whole watching movies in class and Colin being busy during the summer...oh, you know what? I DON'T CARE! I'm so exited about this story! It looks cute! Here I go to read the next chapter!
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