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| wonder1440 2008-01-19 ch 4, | abuseThis was cute. A few grammar problems, but the juicy stuff was there. I do love your side banter with Tory & Colin. He needs nookie in his next story ^_^ |
| wonder1440 2008-01-19 ch 3, | abuseSweet :p |
| wonder1440 2008-01-19 ch 2, | abuseGetting interesting ^_^ |
| wonder1440 2008-01-19 ch 1, | abuseI love the running commentary you have with Tory and Colin! ^_^ |
| Chikorita-Trainer1 2008-01-19 ch 4, | abuseAw, that was SO CUTE! Except you seem to have used more of my story for inspiriation, but whatever. It's not like I own those concepts. Anyway, good story. |
| Chikorita-Trainer1 2008-01-19 ch 1, | abuseUm, you totally ripped off my stpry A Dream Worth Keeping; the whole watching movies in class and Colin being busy during the summer...oh, you know what? I DON'T CARE! I'm so exited about this story! It looks cute! Here I go to read the next chapter! |