Very good, I liked it a lot. :) The flashback was lovely, sad and poignant. Squall's turmoil is very believable too, especially with Rinoa in the condition she is. It's fitting that in the end he sees the differences as well as the similarities between the two situations. Laguna and Raine had a tragic love. Hopefully, Squall and Rinoa's future will be happier.

Aww, this was a really cute story. Well, the ending was, at least. I think you captured the persona's of the characters very well, and the story on a whole was very nicely written. I really enjoyed it. :D I'm adding you to my favorites. I like your style.

I'm speechless... It's a beautiful story. Really. A lot of emotions, so dense... thanks.

This is gorgeous; it's so full of emotion that isn't held back, and I love that in a story.

And personally, I didn't find it anti-Laguna, just very, very Squall. Meaning, all of the parts that highlighted Laguna's leaving Raine were seen through Squall's eyes exactly the way they should be, as a mistake he'll never make. I'm amazed!