Reviews for A Game Of Ghosts

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LoneGunGirl88 2008-07-24 ch 11,	abuse(Yowls in frustration) Why a cliffhanger? Why? I want to know what happens, dammit! Okay, rant over. Loving this, honest to God absolutely LOVING this! The battle was amazing and the last chapter nearly had me in tears! I want to know how this ends!
LoneGunGirl88 2008-07-24 ch 6,	abuseOkay, I was going to wait until I finished to review, but after I read your song choise for the chapter, I couldn't. I LOVE Within Temptation! I thought of that song when I read the chapter title, and then at the end you said it WAS that song and I actually started cheering. I am a geek. ^_^ Anyway, I am absolutely in LOVE with this story so far. It's very well written and the plot is really intriguing. I'd say more but I want to go finish it... (dashes away)
hamster1231 2008-07-14 ch 11,	abuseAltair's alive and Rio's pregnant thats what i'm thinking.Please tell me they'll be more chapters.You've left us all hanging.
hamster1231 2008-07-14 ch 5,	abuseI haven't even read the entire story and i wasn't even looking for the plot hole i just wondered whether people could see him.
hamster1231 2008-07-14 ch 6,	abuseIs Altair actually a ghost and can only Rio and Alex see him or can anyone else? Cos if they did see him then wouldn't it be a bit strange for him to be wondering round in his hood and cloak.
Hedwig the MillenniumOwl 2008-07-09 ch 11,	abuse"Oh my god..." IT'S SANTA CLAUS! Hehe. Anyways, you're evil, just so you know. Evil cliff hanger! (though it was a good one) My favourite part of the chapter was.. “Because Avalar is not like Santa Claus!" xD I dunno why, but I found that really funny. Wouldn't Altair dressed up like Santa be hilarious? xD I don't know whawt to say now, other then good job and that I don't really want it to end (but that does't mean you can't post the last chapter!). Keep it up =] ~Hedwig
Hedwig the MillenniumOwl 2008-07-09 ch 10,	abuseI know I'm rather... very late, but I've been away and busy without internet for a while :[ But now I'm happy because I'm finally catching up! But this chapter was rather sad, but I really enjoyed it! Recent chapters were all action packed it was cool xD And it was all bitter sweet when Altair kissed her and vis versa, like yay it's so cute and finally happening, but boo because he was dying and made it seem just so sad. Either way it was great =] Except it doesn't end here! So I'm off to read the next chapter... ONWARDS! ~Hedwig
Darkgoddess16 2008-06-29 ch 11,	abuseOmg thats so uncool to leave a cliffhanger when it gets that good! yeah its really a good story!
SpazzChicken 2008-06-29 ch 11,	abuseMust-know-what's-in-basement O_O Woo! Good job on this chapter! :D
Gaignun Girl 2008-06-28 ch 11,	abuseAck! Can't wait what will happen next! Ack! lol. Please update I'll try not to get impatience. lol. =]=] XD Gaignun Girl
misikoblossom 2008-06-28 ch 11,	abuseWhat a cliffie! Anyway, well done! I loved the descriptions in this chapter, especially, as well as the plot (which is only getting better and better with each chapter). I have a hunch that Rio is pregnant, no? Hm..just a guess, but do update soon! This fic is really keeping me interested; lovely job!
untouchable1400 2008-06-28 ch 11,	abuseWhat a cliffhanger! I really cant wait for your next chapter! I really like your writing, i bet you could publish something. But please, I WANNA SEE ALTAIR WITH RIO AGAIN! I think i guessed what is happening to rio...but i dont know if i should say it.So, stop reading if you dont want my opinion on that. I think she's pregnant.What with all the brillant baby brother,the fact that she always wanna cry,or throw up.But i pray that Altair is the one making noise in the basement.So...thank you for another wonderful chapter. And update soon :)
Sera22 2008-06-27 ch 11,	abuseOh you are so evil!! ^^ You HAVE to update soon! I can't stand it any longer! Could it be a happy end? Could it? Aw... Sorry.., I so love your story and your writing style, really one of the rare stories here at .
marissafish 2008-06-27 ch 11,	abuseO, can't wait to read what happens next! So much drama and suspense!!
Kaira Sakamoto 2008-06-27 ch 11,	abuse-screams at the top of her lungs, covering her face with her hands and shaking her head- You...you CAN'T be doing this to me! I waited for so long for this, and you leave it off like THIS! ARG! It's too good for its own...well, for it's own good! -coughs- I love this story. It's really amazing, and I was hooked from the start, because it's so different from all the others that I read. You did a really nice job...Sorry about the beginning of this review...I'm usually more composed than this, but...yeah, this just shows how really good of a story this is! Keep writing. I want Altair back. -pouts- Signed, Kaira Sakamoto

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