Reviews for DBZ: Son Gohan the Warrior

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brolly501 2008-09-03 ch 99,	abusegood story
DrCarterMD 2008-08-23 ch 1,	abuseHello, I apologise for not sending you a review earlier, I know how important it is for the authors to recieve feedback on their work from fans. I can honestly say I enjoyed this version of the series alot more than alot of other stories out there and I cant wait to start reading the GT series. I usually wait till series are more than half way finished because I go absolutely insane when updates take more than a day!! I owe you about 99 reviews LOL :-) well lets say what I can say? I think your grasp of the characters was excellent despite the personal touches you made, everyone was very real and very in character. My favorite feature with your stories is the amount of details in the scenes and the visuals one gets from reading it. You definately didnt rush through the series with was an excellent thing. I am gonna say you where the first person I read on FF to get me drawn back into the DBZ fandom. Every chapter was litterally like another episode of dragon ball z and I remember nights where I stayed up till 7 in the morning because I couldnt put my sidekick down. Yes, I actually read fanfic all day and night on my cell phone. Mobile Fanfic... I should copyright that idea LOL. Well once again GREAT JOB! you did everything by the books/tv, it was my pleasure in reading this story and I cant wait for the next saga. May you NEVER LOSE YOUR MUSE and your welcomed to reply back... Amanda
Naruto Rasengan Master 2008-08-18 ch 99,	abuseI must say i really enjoyed this story, initially i stopped reading because of chapter 56/57 chichi's wish. if i had to grade it out of ten id probally give a 6/10 the four points lost would be: chichi's wish meaning no more gohan/videl basically since its illegal for minors to date older women -_- (-2points) you skipped through the fight scenes fairly quick(-1point) you eliminated one of my fav characters til near enough the last few chapters(goten) (-1point) if these things hadnt been altered i probally wouldve given a 10/10
flaminginferno 2008-08-14 ch 99,	abuseWow this story is pretty good. I just finished reading it and I must say I'm pretty impressed. Hope the GT side of it is as good as this.
Anami1x 2008-08-11 ch 92,	abuseI love the story, Chapter 91, the arguement between Frieza and Cell had me in absolute stitches. "Frieza: Shut up. At least I'm not part monkey." I found this line haliarious, how funny would an arguement between Frieza and Cell be. I'm laughing just thinking of it.
TubaMann 2008-08-07 ch 10,	abuseThis is pretty good, I'm really excited to see how the rest plays out
ElementalFoxGoddess 2008-07-29 ch 10,	abusei hope gohan's tail grows back and he gets to keep it! and i hope gohan ends up alone..no offense but i hate vedial for some reason. great story by the way!
Son-Gokuu-2586 2008-07-18 ch 99,	abuseI have to say I was very intrigued by your exciting rewrite of the whole DBZ story and I have to give you grats on your accomplishment being that I just finished your Fic from start to finish its left me wanting more so I can't wait for your next Fic that will fulfill my "needs" of wanting to finish reading your story. Again congratulations on your job well done and I'll be waiting. A Loyal Reader, Son-Gokuu-2586
Stiehl 2008-07-14 ch 99,	abuseWell, I decided to just review the whole fic in one go, since it's complete. Well, at the beginning the story was pretty much just a retelling of the canon, with some extra powerful Gohan moments mixed in. It didn't start to really suck me in until the fight with the Ginyu Force, when he started kicking Recoome around like a football. Oh, and I loved how you made Gohan transform early. That was great. After that, it was all awesome, until the part with the accidental wish. I must admit I wasn't too crazy about Gohan remaining 11 years old forever. I mean, he's never going to get to do most of the things that other people do in their life. Sure, he'll never grow old, but he'll never have the more normal experiences of someone his age. I wouldn't have been so annoyed about it if you'd had it occur a bit later, say after the timeskip to the Buu era. At that point, he would be at least considered an adult. But forgetting that, it really was a brilliant ending, with Gokhan, and the fused Future Trunks and Gohan. Never seen that one before. Hell, I've never seen a fic where Gohan and Goku go into Trunks' world and fix everything in the first place. I've always hated the fact that Gohan became such a wuss after the Cell saga, after becoming the world's strongest fighter. He basically took a backseat to the action from then on, and became just a supporting character -- in other words, nearly useless. I mean, he could at least have kept training, even if he did go to school. That brings me to another point. Did you really have to bring in Saiyaman...? I mean, I laughed at that arc when it first started (in the anime), but the poses made him into such a dork. Anyway, good work. I might not even read the GT series if you write it though. I watched exactly 3 episodes. GT doesn't exist for me, cause I think that GT never should have been made. It was horrible, nothing compared to the original Dragon Ball and DBZ. Eh, I'll read before I judge I guess. Later!
G. Login 2008-06-24 ch 99,	abuseIf you do make a good GT VERSION THAT WOULD BE COOL. Would Goten be replacing Pan in that version because she will never be born from the Eternal Brat lol. I didn't like GT much but Pan was ok to bad.
G. Login 2008-06-24 ch 97,	abuseMulti-form in a clever way to get around the rumor. But after a while want they notice Gohan isn't aging either? Just a thought
G. Login 2008-06-23 ch 62,	abuseHe is using the stupid outfit but at least he does know it looks stupid, and puts up with it. I like that Chi-Chi reallizes the error of the wish, and reallizes that she has ruined any chance of having grandcildren by Gohan, and to top it off the perfect woman shows up too lol.
G. Login 2008-06-23 ch 61,	abuseNow that is an effective disguise. Reminds me of Captain Marvil. It would be hard to think that an eleven year old kid is an 18-20 year old crime fighter. I loved Vageta's comment about the new member of the Ginyu force lol
G. Login 2008-06-22 ch 50,	abuseGohan's choice of clothing is cool. It make a slight differanse that works because it honors both his teachers in this story. Unlike the show where Piccilo was his only main teacher.
BYoshi1993 2008-06-22 ch 99,	abuseHey sorry I havn't reviewed throughout your story but I will review more in the next one, that is a promise. I can't wait for your next story. Congrats on being the arthur of one of the longes DBZ fics. I liked Gohan, Goku, Krillen, and Yamcha teaching, it was very amuzing. I also liked how you kept to the story, but didn't go off having Gohan and Goku completly unbeatable as Super Sayain fives or something. And your comments aren't ramblings, they are your notes and opinion on your stories and I love to read them. And don't worry about the twist in the story, I actually liked it, it made your story very unique along with Gohan beating Hurcule. Can't wait for the update. -Michael (AKA BYoshi1993) P.S. Please email me on whatever you feel is important. It's on my homepage. If you find nothing, you don't have to.

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