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| Trivette Lover Heather 2008-03-27 ch 1, | abuseNice shot here. I liked it. :) This was written very well for it's length. Great job! Take care, -TLH |
| bj lucas 2008-01-20 ch 1, | abusethat was great, I can imagine face feeling like that too. Thank you for sharing, I loved it! Barbara |
| LaneIA 2008-01-20 ch 1, | abuseExcellent story! Of course I can never read enough of your well written fiction, so as I finished it I was thinking..."How did Face get bloody", "How does he find peace of mind" "How, how, how"! Sorry I just get greedy when stories are well written. Keep up the good work! Lane |