Ooh, his evil plan is working!

Ahem.

The last chapter was really sad. And I almost cried when you described Zidane's state when Blank found him in the cell. Excellent story, and I can't wait to read more!

OMG, why are all the good FF9 fics either paused or stopped entirely?!
What I just read over the last couple of hours was surely one of the best fanfics for FF9 I've ever seen and I'm DYING to know what will happen now to Zidane. And Garnet's soul is not lost forever, right? I'm not her biggest fan, but... but killing her off like that!
You're one good writer. So please, please, please, update this fic soon.

Holy schnikeys! You have GOT to update this! I swear to you I'll go utterly mad if I don't find out what happens! This story is absolutely breath taking! I totally reiterate what I said earlier! Your Zidag's are the freaking cream of the crop!

I really hope I'm kissing enough bum to get you to update. I really, really do. :]

Sincerely,
DragonGirl323

Great story, I can't wait to see how it ends!

i do like your fic quite a lot this is very interesting with murmur and zidane beocming a god hm i woudner what will happen to him now since its pretty obvious what he has planned. though he is immortal i wounder if he can become mortal again probably not right. to bad he will be sad as he watches his freinds grow old and die if thats the case . anyways i love the fic do keep updating it i wish for it to continue. i really do. i want to know what happens next. so as i said PLEASE UPDATE SOON. i will give you lots of cookies

o .o Holy... now that's some good writing right there. This chapter was really good, I was glad to see that Zidane wasn't just going crazy, but was actually thinking about his actions and abilities. It definitely gives him the depth he deserves.

Looks like things will only get more interesting from here on out. I'll wait until then! ^^

Wow... I can't wait to see how this ends!

Great story! I really hope you update soon!!

Short but effective! Thanks for this lil' dose of excitement.
I liked the way you led the reader on, making us doubt our hero, but then we're assured better.
It's interesting to watch Zidane get a quick grip on his new abilities and try to twist them to his advantage, especially with Murmur. I suspect he's going to have to learn even more tricks before this mess will be over!

Good luck writing, for I hope to see more soon!

for a good part of this chapter I imagined Zidane wearing a cape.


God, Ima loser, anyways, great chapter! even thought it was horrifically short. lol j/k it was fine.

I'm just very glad Zidane still has a soul. can't wait for more!

Wow. What a great story! I just now found it, and I'm so glad I did. Poor Garnet...Such a tragic death. Or maybe Zidane has a plan to change that? Guess I'll have to wait and see. Try to update sometime soon! I love it!

I know what's next.

...It's impossible to lose faith in him. He's Zidane. Even at the beginning of the chapter where you made it seem as though he was too far gone to see himself, I knew that it was the facade he was putting on for Murmur.
Short chapter? Oh yes. Unbearably short, but great nonetheless.
Well done. I can't wait for more, but I suppose I'll have to. =]
Lovely. As always.
kt

Holy crap... there are no words for the sheer EPICNESS of this chapter. o_o

All I can say is I will be waiting here for the next installment. This story never ceases to amaze me. Please write more soon.

i've just back from my vacation and very happy too see this new chapter, hurray... \(^.^)/
yes, i do really hope that zidane would become their kami. but, uh oh, i never think it would be this way. murmur is really cruel... (but, really brilliant with her plot. wow, she is really a badass and i'm still liking her ^^). i like how you describe the moment between zidane and murmur/garnet, as if i potray it in my mind and i see a slow motion film in my head. love it. poor zidane and i feel really sad for him. oh boy, you should make a happy ending for him later. don't tell me you're going to let garnet gone forever... T_T
but you're the writer of this great fic. whatever the result is, i believe it would be great :)

ps. thanks for the early note on the chapter. now i'm not confuse again ^^