I saw your request for reviews in WendWriter's forum "Can We Talk?", and as I am probably the only person versed well (or really at all) in the Teen Titans fandom, I decided to come and help out.

This first chapter is a little average. There are a few places where your sentences run on and there are a few cliche descriptions, such as "emerald" and "ice blue" eyes. It's often difficult to find original descriptions, but falling back on generics isn't going to help you.

There's a few punctuation mishaps here and there, like the absence of punctuation when you have words before a character speaks.

Your characterisation as a whole is pretty good. Beast Boy is a little mopey, but that's expected, but I don't think he'd put off his duties to watch Terra, as much as he likes her. He has a sense of responsibility, even if he sometimes seems childish. He also has respect for Robin, and as such I don't believe he would blow off his orders to patrol.

It has a lot of potential, but I *cough* have taken too much time from my work already. *sheepish* I'll get back to you again about your other chapters tonight on my other account. (SaoirseWaveglow)

~CassandraGray

I'm not a Terra lover myself, but I've got to say, your first chappie was quiet good. I also was dissapointed in the eposode 'Things change' I felt that it wasn't enough.

Anyway good Job, keep writing!