 petite-dreamer 2008-11-05 . chapter 15Very nice! You are very talented at description and capturing the personality of each character. Although I am a little confused on who the fourth one is referencing - is it the golden wolf guy? |
 Dragoness243 2008-10-13 . chapter 14Wow, these chapters are so well writen and the description is simply amazing. Keep up the good work! |
 Redmav 2008-10-12 . chapter 14All of them, beautifully done and well thought out. I especially like the fact that you take the views of characters that do not have a substantial role in the game, or even part of it directly (the chapter with the prisoner-soon-to-be-death-sword, for example). Don't get me wrong, the chapters focusing on Link and Zelda the other main characters were also re well done, but it is great to see some people taking a great story/universe and putting there own spin on it.
I also have a LOZ epic planned out and am just beginning put down on paper, so I am curios to see how yours will/would turn out, depending on if you will continue with it since you lost some of it when your computer crashed.
It's good to hear that your computer is back up and working. You have a great writing style and voice, and I will look forward to any updates of this storie, and any others |
 Fatal Farewell 2008-06-21 . chapter 11These are awesome, can't wait till there's more! |
 Peace of the Moon 2008-06-02 . chapter 10I like your one-shots so far. Very nice. ^^ Just out of curiosity, are you going to, once finished them all, state which chapter was for which character? For those who can't seem to understand who's is who's. I know that the order so far is 1. Midna, 2. Link, 3. Zelda, 4. Ganondorf...I think, 5. Midna again, 6. Colin, 7. Ilia, 8. Rutela, 9. Ralis, and...this one I've no idea. ^^'
Anyway, I hope you continue. Ja ne! |
 Supreme.Empress.DragonGirl 2008-06-02 . chapter 10Have I mentioned that I absolutely love the beauty of your writing? So amazing. I love how you can give voice to many different characters...
By the way, who is Blood written in mind of? |
 Frodo Silverlune 2008-05-28 . chapter 9Wow. Wow. This is amazing! Beautiful and so poetic. I absolutely love it. Going on my favorites. You should write a TP story. I would be right there in a heartbeat! |
 Supreme.Empress.DragonGirl 2008-04-01 . chapter 1Hi--I was going to say, maybe when you decide to work on the epic again, you could use these as parts. They're really descriptive and such beautiful writing! The only problem I have is that tense isn't constant (was/were/-ed vs. is/are/-s)
Other than that, fantastic! |
 Supreme.Empress.DragonGirl 2008-04-01 . chapter 8HOLYCROW!
Those are all SO beautiful! I love them! Those are amazing! I'm new to the world of FFN--are all drabbles like that, with the repetition of words and such? Keep writing them! |
 eolianstar 2008-03-30 . chapter 7Wo~ow! Very impressive! I love the artistic thoughts and striking images of all of these sketches. You have a charming and complex process of thought in many of these works that are so elemental and lovely... It's so nice how each sketch stems from a single word and centralizes it as its theme.
My favorite is Rain (: It had such pretty imagery and feeling. Though, rain is one of my favorite motifs, so I might be biased. La~
Well, I love the poetical feels of all of these 'chapters.' So very reminiscent of TP, and still original. Good work! |
 dwaxler 2008-03-25 . chapter 6this is so deep. its like u study a scene and transform it into something beautiful. keep making these. |
 evanesced04 2008-03-24 . chapter 1You have a very unique prose style--haunting and slightly macabre. Lovely work, keep writing! |
 Silver Volken Raven 2008-02-10 . chapter 4This are short, but sweet ^^ I'm confused as to who is 3rd person Narrator in Chapters 3 and 4?
Good job on these! Keep up the good work |
 Mei-lan 2008-02-02 . chapter 3 Hmm...this is pretty lovely so far! I've never read Zelda fic before, and I found it quite enjoyable. Thank you! |