 ThunderRiver411 2009-01-31 . chapter 14I was just looking though those who have me on their alert list and found you. This is pretty good so far and I hope you continue to write fanfiction.
Anyway, I know when you added me to alerts, but I'm now in the 'new start' mode and I'm planning on re-doing a story I started during this past week. A Pokemon story and a strange one.
I hope you continue to write and if you interested to know about the main character of my upcoming re-done version of a story I did this week go to my profile/bio or whatever you call it for pictures. Send me a message sometime and I hope you read my story once I start work on it. |
 LiliNeko 2009-01-28 . chapter 13Dude, don't give me that look...SUU-UU-UURE I'm a month and a day BEHIND on reading and reviewing ya chappies FINISHED story...But that doesn't give you the right to juu-uudge me!
((lol **looks at the time, 4:52 am** has so much to do for errands before a long work shift tonight -_- ))
DAMN there's some CAP happiness yelling going on XD DUDE for some reason I got a crack out of the 'figure pulled back the hood from over his head...' Gawd, probably I had it pictured in my head when reading, buwhaha XD oh GASP! Chase and Nogitsune?! WHO KNEW! Oh Giovanni eh? I think I actually had a feeling that it was him ((really)) BAM, Vaporeon, wee-ee-ee~
LOL at Master's quote - “Persian, you’re my last chance at world domination! OH snaa-aap, they need a 'fighting' type Eevolution!
Oo0o0o the plot thickens with Chasey going kaa-blooey XD LOL damnit, the hand on Leta's cheek before ACTUALLY kicking the bucket...Wait for the right moment...Oh there it is with the "remember, I'll nev..." XD
HAHAHA I can see why CrystalMask was not so pleased with this chappie's ending, haha XD Well at least you got the Epilogue going ;p But that will be another time for Lili should be getting some sleep before going crazy ;p
Nice chappie especially at 5 in the morning ;p I'll talk to ya later! Much lovelove and ta-ta for now!
Lili Neko =^-^= |
 Mountaindude 2009-01-07 . chapter 14 Oh, no...please don't hunt me down...look! I'm reviewing the story!
Anyway, nice ending dude! My story seemed to drag on and on, but you ended it at a great time! (Although I still wish it hadn't ended...) |
 Cayetana 2008-12-27 . chapter 14 is writting on iphone cuz laptop died (again) , will review when laptop lves again, won't be available till god knows when due to lqptop and depression caused by poke. Mystery dungeon explorers of darkness, awesome chappie, still cant believe u rlly did give da subscription( will glomp attack u when laptop lives again) |
 Latias 24 2008-12-27 . chapter 14Happy Christmas! Aw...is this the end? I really like this story...Oh well, all good things have to end. >_ |
 Felix the Eeveetrainer 2008-12-27 . chapter 14(Glomps) I knew you wouldn't do that to us.
So... is that it, or is there another story coming?
~General Everin Stormclaw of the Emerald Stars and the New Chu Order, Dragon Prince and the Sixth Sutakage, Bearer of the Prophecy and the Moonrider, Commander of the Blood Talons, out. |
 Cem 2008-12-27 . chapter 14 Yay happy ending! I knew you couldn't kill off your hero. But how did Chase survive? (The ending sort off reminds me of the the ending from Tales of Symphonia 2. Have you ever played that game?) |
 Felix the Eeveetrainer 2008-12-24 . chapter 13AWESOMENESS!
(Gasp) You can't kill Chase! Noes!
~General Everin Stormclaw of the Emerald Stars and the New Chu Order, Dragon Prince and the Sixth Sutakage, Bearer of the Prophecy and the Moonrider, Commander of the Blood Talons, out. |
 Cem-chan 2008-12-23 . chapter 13 Woah this can't be the end! What happened to happy endings? Chase has to live. Cant the almighty god give him another life. Please don't tell me it's actually all over. (Good chapter btw) |
 Sora1589 2008-10-03 . chapter 11Ahh cliff hanger hehe, what will happen now?? and where's Chase!?!?!?! Ahh I hope you update soon :D |
 ashy-boy 4 evaaaaaaaaaa 2008-09-08 . chapter 12 i know who's under Arceus...ASH! The Ash in the sphere is a clone!! GO ASH!! SAVE DA DAY!! lol okay, ash fandom aside, AWESOME CHAPPIE, but i wanted it to be loonger T_T its so shoort, the shortness takes away the passion! lol, longer chappies would be nice! LOL at Mask being "madder than a tauros" but you shouldn't use mad cuz it makes her sound like she's "mad" as in "mad scientist" and we know she ain't mad rightt? And leta was like "oh...my...god...i just remembered that i love chocolate..." , she didn't say it but you and i know she was thinking it! I KNOW EVERYTHING! KEKEKEKE!
well until next chapteer! |
 mountaindude 2008-08-30 . chapter 12 OK, when some evil Master dude gets this excited over playing a flute, something's seriously wrong...^^
Anyway, you need to continue (when you get off from school) this thing, or else I will force you to...(Insert really bad thing here)! I mean it! |
 Felix the Eeveetrainer 2008-08-30 . chapter 12Evil cliffhanger!
~General Everin Stormclaw of the Emerald Stars, Dragon Prince and the Fifth Sutakage, Bearer of the Prophecy, out. |
 LiliNeko 2008-08-30 . chapter 12Chaa-aase!
Wee-ee-ee! It's been awhile since ya updated and I clicked on your link RIGHT AWAY when posted! GASP! SHOCKER! Ok, reading now ^^ ...I REVIEWED BEFORE CrystalMask! ((That's right Crystal, what now?! BUWHAHA!))
I dont remember if Adam was in the last one but, woot Adam is back?! Lol XD Haha about time someone mention how pathetic PIKACHU is !! The hell? He has a thingy-a-mabob to send peeps to another dimension?!
GASP, ANGRY Gary alert! Ho0o0o0ott! **smiles and swoon**
Master an evil villain cheating?! Noes wai! Never in the right mind he would ever do that! Pfft, cheating? Master will never do that XD
**joins the girls** WHAT?! CHASE IS NO LONGER WITH US?! LIKE IN DEAD?! NOO00OOES!! I can't live any longer without Chase not around...Hears the line "Not so fast" GASP! Who could that bee-ee-ee?!?!
Lol, this is me when I read and review right away when you just post not to long ago...OH snap, I just realize I review before you did mine! I WIN! Oh man, I really need sleep now ^^ So ending this now so I can sleep, kekeke XD Nighty night and much lovelove! Ta-Ta for now!
Lili Neko =^-^= |
 Cem-chan 2008-08-29 . chapter 12Yay your alive. ^^ Great chpater as always. Chase is back for the final showdown yay. BTW have you ever a Legend of Zelda game? For some reason the 10 year skip in this story makes me think of the ending from Ocarina of Time.
So how is Chase going to get everyone out of the portal. And actually close it so Master's pokemon can get hurt. Wait a minute. Just who is Master anyway?You never did reveal his identity.
Oh yeah. Is Rurouni Kenshin any good? I've been hearing that title a lot lately so I was wondering if I should check it out after I'm done with Combat Butler.
Update soon |