damn...
this is good

this is wonderfully written
you have a wide vocabulary of victorian speach, if I might comment on it!
Loved it, and major props:)

Wow... so bittersweet and perfect. The sex bit almost melted my brain.

Wow. I'm so glad I read this. I'm not really one for femmeslash (or at least I shy away from the M-rated ones, because they're mostly smut and I'm not into femmesmut), but this was amazing. I was almost near tears at the end. Great job.

Beautiful! Seriously, this was great. You got the characters voices down perfectly.

"“I shan’t,” Pippa sniffed. “And I want to go indoors.” - Perfectly Pippa.

I also loved how complex your Fee was. Charming, and vulnerable and a little nasty. So perfect. And, the venereal disease conversation was love.

Pippa's dirty talk was also completely hot, and strangely in character. I could really see her liking to have that kind of control over Felicity, and with Felicity's problems accepting her feeling for women I could totally see her getting off on being talked to that way.

Anyway, I'll stop rambling now, but great story!

That was interesting. I'm not one for femmeslash, but you not only captured each of the girls' characters (and their motives), but you also tied in perfectly how Felicity looked down upon Oscar Wilde in TSFT. I love how nonchalantly they talked about diseases and sodomy =P Great job!