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Reviews for: Murder of One
Lord Beeblebum
2008-04-30 . chapter 1
I found this recc'd over at Schnoogle so I thought I'd give it a whirl. I actually quite like the second person style; it's a bit more unusual and makes you identify closer with Ginny.
It's such a frustrating story. You want Ginny to do something about her discontent. Where's the fiery girl gone? I like how she thinks being with Harry would be better but realises that what she's remembering is all the good bits and none of what caused them to split in the first place. I think that's very true to real life.
LovelyLytton
2008-04-22 . chapter 1
So depressing, but very well done.
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