 sk8rgrl 2008-01-24 . chapter 1 WOW! This is so good, I cried, seriously, for multiple reasons/moments. It's so touching to get inside the head of a victim, and the descriptions of Liv through her eyes are amazing. You hit the nail on the head more times than I can count. You really have an understanding of Olivia's character, it's uncanny. My favorite part is probably when Olivia gives Becca her lipgloss instantaneously, just because Becca asked. That is so like her. And later, when you mention how it's vanilla rather than mandarin (no E - typo!) like Olivia smells, that was wonderful. So different from Mutism and yet still oh so satifying. Yipee!
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 Piper-Jacko06-Butterflygirl 2008-01-20 . chapter 1wow. this was cool, i'm gonna put it on my faves list. How ocme you haven't wrote anymore SVU fics, your good at them. You should write a ER fic, i've got one on the go, (I want to write a bit more before i start postingthough)its based on the first episode of the 13th series i think, the one wehre Steve kidnaps Sam and Abbey has the baby and all that jazz.
Anyway good story. X |