Your writing style is very poetic, I like that about it. The insight to Isis was obviously well thought-out and described, which at the beginning of your story was the first plus. I can't stand rushed or lacking introductions, they seem to strip the story of it's mood. Everything was well-paced despite being a little overly-descriptive, which really helped tie the ending together. Seto's reaction was perfectly in character and was a nice contrast to Isis's thought process, which seemed to revolve without end. Their speech was something you could imagine being directly quoted from the anime, so props for that as well.

Overall...please pursue a writing career.

great story!

I will not lie when I say that your writing talents completely bewilder me, as they are in complete divergence with your presented age. Presented. Oh, but who are you to lie? Your chosen genres and style are above and beyond the expected level of maturity, your comfort in expression fit for one many years older. I must say that you will continue to astound your readers with your methods of approach and resounding diligence in your work regardless of age as ability will surely grow with you.

I have yet to tackle your lengthier story, but I hope you've since learned to pace yourself. Heavy text can sometimes be intimidating and you lose focus in over-description. Contrary to your apologetic intentions, I, for one, am glad that you are not easily discouraged by limited knowledge of the subject to be able to take interest and fly. In fact, you thrive on canon ambiguity.

Yes, it was an enjoyable read.

Regards,
TheWanderingAuthor

Wonderful job! This is one of the few belivable Trustshipping fics I've come across. :) You've developed the story along nicely and best of all, they're in character! :D I hope to see more from you in the future.

If you have any Isis x Seto recommendations I'd love to hear them.

Also, I've linked your fic here:

What an impressive view on Isis! There's a pathos in the style – that seems to fit her way of thinking well – that took me some getting used to, but the writing is really good, and precise, if that makes any sense. That too seems to suit her, because there's a strong sense of her existing physically, of course (and I like how she never really loses that, even though the visions), but also being above things, analysing them more than other people.
One image I liked a lot was "as if the gods had a sight that they were itching to show her and simply couldn’t wait to showcase their creation".
I kind of want to shake her, though. She'd deserve to have a life of her own!

I think there's a word missing in this sentence: "way that she knew would to her to Seto’s quarters"?

This "He had probably been preparing it in his head before he answered." made me grin. Oh, Kaiba. Not that it -has- to be true, but there mere fact someone else can think this about him... *g*

I love how you created a confrontation between them; they can be really great opposites, with their so different views, and I liked the contrast between her thoughts, and then his first words. I was a bit worried when she sees "him consider, weaken, falter", because I can't see him give in that easily, but I liked how it turned out. And the ending came as a bit of a shock even though it shouldn't have.

Now...this is a brilliant fanfic. Nice twist at the end, the characters are in character, and it's very vivid. Now,continue, please.