u have 2 update sn i cant wait 2 c wat happens next keep up the gd work : )

omg please update this soon its really good so far

I like it so far... stupid edwin waking her up!! bad time dude... lol

very good. original! lol most of the stuff on this site is dasey, so i guess its nice to get a change. =]

Aww! a crush! :) I can't wait for more! :)

I actually like the idea of this story and and the pairing is fine with me. I'm into this story and I can't wait to read more

Well, apart from spelling and grammar and such, it's pretty good so far.

Just work on your spelling/grammar/punctuation. ;P

Wow, i like this
and long live Derilizzie or w/e it is, ahha
anyways, i like this coupling too, as long as it's believable and such
anyways, i can't wait for an update