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sasusaku9895
2009-05-08 . chapter 1
That was great! I didnt noe that u added a next season for outcast.. i didnt noe until i checked ur profile.! i didnt noe until the next few days after i finished reading the last season. just saying luv da last one btw!
bloodkunai
2009-01-25 . chapter 8
please continue
lozzii
2009-01-06 . chapter 8
please please update this is the best story so far
hollywood-135
2008-12-12 . chapter 8
Hey! I like your story. It has good suspense and I can't wait for more! :)
Unfortunately i don't have a big imagination at the moment so i can't think of any questions or suggestions for the games, but good luck!
Keep up the awesome job!

P.S. I noticed it's been four months since you last updated... You didn't forget about this story did you?! I hope you're just busy with school or something, and trust me, I know exactly how you feel! ...So i don't blame you. :)
Corneliagirl101
2008-12-12 . chapter 8
amazing i luv this story . and outcast i ma so glad ther is a sequel
aprilfreak101
2008-12-10 . chapter 8
please update soon... i'm dying to know what happens next
Sweet Cherry Sakura
2008-10-19 . chapter 8
I think that you should make temari kiss shikamaru and then have ino see it and then they play the game and she tells shikamaru about the baby on accident or something like that
shelby
2008-09-21 . chapter 2
please continue im begging you i cant wait any longer so please please please continue
Kanimi
2008-09-03 . chapter 8
uPdAtE uPdAtE uPdAtE !
this story is so awesome :D
kimiko77
2008-08-12 . chapter 8
so now theres a party with alcohol. i hope nobody does something they'll regret and ino is pregnant so she shouldnt even be drinking any. maybe she could shout it out in front of everyone at the party cuz she gets all mad there questioning her on why shes not playing and being pregnant gives you mood swings. and wow tenten is like a guy magnet but its so cute how neji is getting jealous. cool chapter and cant wait for the next one.
Fantasy Fan Girl
2008-08-08 . chapter 8
Good chapter and i'm very excited for the next one. Sorry it took me so long to review. Also, i did find a few mistakes and i wanted to tell your beta but for some reason on her profile page you can't send her a message. I don't want to hassle you with explaining some grammer stuff so if you could just tell her to PM me or something so that i can explain stuff to her. Thanks a ton. Keep writing.

FFG- Jo
xAerodronex
2008-08-07 . chapter 8
OMG, I loved it!! As usual.. but I am hoping that you update soon :) Its been so long that I actually had to go back and re-read a couple chapters before this! Thats bad.. haha.

Anyways, great chapter. I hope you update soon and I cant wait to read their games teeheehee! It otta be pretty funny. But please UPDATE SOON!! I dont want to wait another week/month for the next chappie!

I definately understand the whole busy work schedule and everything. School and friends is hard crap people! Give her slack! Haha, anyways.. cant wait for the next review. This story is getting better and better!
GurenSR
2008-08-07 . chapter 8
Thanks for finding the time to upload! dont worry about the length of the chapter you're the writer! ^^ great chapter keep it up and ill comment on the next chapter when it arrives. ^_^
windmelody
2008-08-05 . chapter 8
I like it and please update!
Akira-loveable
2008-08-03 . chapter 8
good chapter idc if it wasnt that long
it still rocked :) well keep goin i'm dieing to know wats gonna happen
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