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| Blueowl 2008-07-22 ch 6, | abuseI am looking forward to the next part, and hope you update soon. I am curious to see more of Siniathúr's magic and what Strider is going to do now. |
| meiren 2008-07-20 ch 6, | abuseInteresting. Though it's a little odd that after 67 years the elves couldn't find him when the orcs managed to sneak up on him. I'll look forward to more. |
| hoyt 2008-07-11 ch 6, | abuse'an elfling' is two words... |
| hoyt 2008-07-11 ch 5, | abusearwen is the coolest elf out of all of them |
| My Flawed Perfection 2008-07-10 ch 6, | abuseHello! I love your story! It's great. There aren't that many Elfing!Harry/LoTR xovers and this one is awesome. I can't wait for you to update. I hope you update soon! Keep up the great work MFP |
| Rose-Aislin 2008-07-09 ch 6, | abuseI am really, really enjoying this fic so far! I love elfing!Harry stories and look forward to seeing where you take it. I'm also glad that Aragorn is now in the story! |
| carree71432 2008-07-08 ch 6, | abuseI've really been enjoying your story. The latest chapter read very well. I love Treebeard. Can't wait for the next chappie. |
| Ie-maru 2008-06-22 ch 6, | abuseI feel so sorry for poor little Harry! I hope things turn up for him. Please update soon! |
| forsaken angel of doom 2008-06-16 ch 6, | abusewhat happens? i hope you update soon i wanna know what happens so P.L.E.A.S.E update |
| Earendil Vorondo 2008-06-15 ch 6, | abuseI am confused. How did Harry reach Fangorn. Fangorn is many hundred miles away from Rivendell. How did Harry reach Fangorn, when the elves were following him, not to mention other threats on the road. Secondly, to reach to Fangorn, one has to follow one of the following routes 1.The Old Forest Road(near eagle's eyrie) 2.The Mines of Moria. 3.Red Horn Pass 4.Gap of Rohan The first three would take him through Lorien, Galadriel's realm, while the last would take him perilously close to Saruman's fortress, Isengard. Not to mention, how could a three year old elfling, with such a fragile composition manage to make such a long journey. He could not have apparated, as apparation requires the knowledge of the destination. On another note, will Harry be using magic like that in Harry Potter series. |
| shadow lupus 2008-06-14 ch 6, | abuseawesome story so far! how old does harry (sorry cant spell his new name lol) look at 67? cannot wait for the next chapter! shadow lupus |
| Mynona 2008-06-14 ch 2, | abuseSo, I adore HP/LotR crossovers. And while your idea for the story wasn't the most original, it's okay. But (there's always a but, beware of it ^^) your writing isn't what it could be. It's choppy, too brief and, in many cases, lacks depth and proper punctionation. You're in need of a good beta and a couple of writing classes. Your writing isn't bad, just poor. I hope that you'll take the advice, and get a good beta, so that you can be the best author possible. Practice, and evolve. =) |
| honey-senpai 2008-06-13 ch 6, | abusesoo when are you going to update son i hope as you have hooked me on this fic |
| AmunRa02 2008-06-09 ch 6, | abuseOMG. This is so good! I need more! You've turned me into a rabid addict for great fanfiction like yours! Definitely going into favorites! |
| Curalium Lacrimo 2008-06-08 ch 5, | abuseThis has to be the 3rd or 4th time I've read this fanfic and it seems to always get better. I know you must get fed up of being asked this, but are you going to be continuing this story? It has to be one of the better HPLOTR xover's I've read. You are a very good writer and I like how you have moved the plot on at a comfortable speed, I also like how you've shaped your characters and I can't wait to see where you go with this story as you've taken a fairly common plot and put many unique spins on it. Curalium_Lacrimo PS: I you want me to beg for an update, I quite happily will :) |