In the first sentence I think you meant "...in the first four years..." not seven

Nice chapter.

Amber

Severus think all the time what he think it's supposed to be and more often it was wrong.

This is a very lovely and fascinating story. You have written a story with a very intriguing plot. I like the twist, especially on Lily's part. I enjoy reading it immensely. You know, I usually steer away from OC, but yours is well written and developed that I can't help but to keep on reading. I actually read the whole story in one go. Thank you for the story, I'm looking forward for the next chapter. Thank you again and have a pleasant day. ;)

~HTS

Thanks for the recap.

If Harry is going back how are they going to explain Harrison?

Ok this fic is interesting but I'm really confused now it seems as if when,where,how,and why were mixed together. Always is the same as never,up is down and over is under.
In brief I'm totally lost

Keep writting though, I'll try to figure it out. ^^

Oh, that was great! Love it. I'm so glad they are together again :) Great chapter, looking forward to the next. Thanks.

This was powerful

I'm glad Severus take a good decision.

please cont. love the story.

Poor Chloe! I hate Lily, how can she do that? I hope Severus comes back to his senses. Great chapter! Can't wait to read the next one.

This is getting more and more interesting, can't wait to read more! Please update soon :) Thanks! Love this story.

The reasoning of the women is pretty accurate.

I don't believe Severus. He just got Chloe back after being forcibly away from both her and their son, and now that Lily's offering him a chance to get Lily back at the cost of Chloe's life, he's going to take it, without considering what everyone else involved would feel? Especially Harry when his real mom suddenly drops dead for no reason, while the woman who helped KIDNAP him from his birth mom suddenly returns from the dead??

Unless Severus and Lily are planning to abandon Harry once Lily's back, the two of them think Harry's going to take having Lily back in his life, after finding out everything she helped to ruin their lives, without a fight?