awwwww...how sweet! _ so i guess aya's just...

...i dunno

awww. thats so sweet and nice.. luved it!

wow...*in a trance* ...deep...that was really good! .

Kawaii, kawaii! I don't usually like a Youji/Omi pairing, but this was very well done and I like it. I'm a sucker for happy endings, despite all the angst I write. Very good job.

That was adorable. I love Yohji and Omi as a couple.

I think it was really sweet. I like the characterization you had. It doesn't seem too far off. I hope you'll continue to write more. I've enjoyed your stories so far. _

honky dory! man..i thought this with the song from Depeche Mode "Home"..which by the way would have been a nicer choice..._ but its still like _ heehee

keep on the good work..and please if you ahve any question about DM ask me! they have a lot of songs..begging to be made in song fics!

you probably think i should write..but i'm the process off..but so many other! ok..me stop..nice!

that started out okay, in the beginning it seemed like they were on this "big-brother, little-brother" thing and that was fine. But why did you have to put the yaoi part in it? I'm a yaoi fan, really, but it didn't work this time. Omi's too young to have a serious relationship and we all know Yohji's straight. I liked it better when they were acting like brothers better.