You know, I could actually see this playing out in my head. Very cool job with this scene.

Bri is back in action, and please try not to give the First a form. That would be so bad. Great chapter!

Another awesome chapter!! Hope they can save Bri in time!

Buffy can't help but be a little suspicious about people. It's in her very own slayer nature. Great chapter!!

Another great chapter. I can't wait to see where this story leads. Update when ya can!!

I like how you can write in all these characters without getting the viewers lost or confused. Very cool!

This is great. I love the crossovers with the Tin Man. That show was so freakin cool!