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jade nightvain
2008-06-30
ch 1,
abusethis was amazing... i really believe that hes jealous. Great job!
hanyou2005
2008-06-24
ch 1,
abuse0.0 i always thought that theyd make a cute couple an now i no yay -gives u an extra choclatey chunk cookie- yay i cant wait for u to put up mor fanfics aqbout them!
arathcanjustdie
2008-05-13
ch 1,
abuseI liked it, SHORT, lol, but very sweet, and really like Cain. Lol.
Flo
2008-03-26
ch 1, anon.
abuseThis is excellent. Very sweet. I can definately see Cain's dilemma. ;D
Lattelady
2008-03-20
ch 1,
abuseBeautiful story. Poor Cain he took the long way to figure it out, but it was entertaining to read his thoughts.
Sakara-chan
2008-03-20
ch 1, anon.
abuseI've never read a Tin man fanfic before so this was very interesting for me, I really liked it and its very well written without a beta.
Cotswold
2008-03-10
ch 1,
abuseaw this was so sweet. i really liked it.
EreshkigalGirl
2008-02-03
ch 1,
abuseOh, that is just so cute. I love it!
Miss Selah
2008-02-02
ch 1,
abuseoAo I would KILL for even a portion of your writing skill. ;A; At least youre not really in the Inuyasha fandom anymore... it gives the rest of it a chance to win the awards.

*tease* Please update Raindrops.
WarmTea
2008-02-01
ch 1,
abuseThis is really well written and the characterizations are right on point. Great job.
Jennifer
2008-01-23
ch 1, anon.
abuseAnother great story. I don't even know what Tin Man is about (besides the fact that it is related to the Wizard of Oz) but when I saw you had another story out, I came running. Lol. It's a really good story and I has gotten me interested in the show. So keep up the good work!
chatty
2008-01-22
ch 1, anon.
abuseBeautifully simple and sweet. Cain's jealousy felt so vivid and I loved the way it all felt better from just the small act of holding DG's hand. Hope it didn't get all the Tin Man fangirling out of your system and that there's more to come!
PalisDelon
2008-01-22
ch 1,
abuseVery cool. I like introspective one-shots.
shippo_smommy
2008-01-21
ch 1, anon.
abuseWell I liked it. I always did picture Cain as being a jealous man. Or maybe possessive is a better word. Holding tight to what's his so he doesn't lose that which is precious to him again. Like in here with how frustrated he is with his seeming inability to connect with DG the way the others can, and it makes him think less of his own connection with her. You captured it really well.
K. A Zerlang
2008-01-20
ch 1,
abuseHehe, I loved it.
Jealousy can work two ways, it can make a man ugly, or it can make him more desirable, and in Cain's position, it is the latter:) I always love a jealous Cain, so you so made my day here!
Haha, I loved it, very muchelini, and you did an amazing job of writing it:)
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