oh man, i cried at the end, when Sirrus was begging to be remembered. I remember you, Sirrus..
You are an excellent writer! this is so beleivable and sad..poor Sirrus, i adore him!! T_T

No wait, this one is fantastic too. You're such a talented writer; you have a magnificent way with words. I've read this over several times and every sentence is just so rhythmic and in character. I really hope you keep writing Sirrus or Achenar fanfictions; they're such fun characters. :)

Aww, this was so sweet. Poor Sirrus. I like to think that before the blaming, and even through it, Sirrus and Achenar were friends.

*sees how Lutra's review got eaten* *prays that hers won't be*
Uh, here, let me finish for her: "I think that this sentence in particular was awesome and globally, totally, absolutely 'pwnd' as you say". Yup, that's what she was gonna say- or something like that. Yup, I can read minds. -_-
Tariam, that new Sirrus/Spire/tragedy rocks, as usual, and I totally agree with the power of the idea of making him lose his memories. It seems very appropriate, and adds to that "unfeeling" bit.
Very well done. :)

You know how much I love tragedy. And today was a good concert, my friends came, I got 3 seasons of one of my fave TV shows...and then there's Sirrus on Spire tragedy! Yay! Way to make my day, dude :)

I love Sirrus trying to remember everyone and forgetting. I think that's what gets me the most, since he always had such a perfect memory (like being able to remember that painting of them on Myst and carve it? yikes!).

"I find myself unable to hate, unable to laugh, unable to cry, unable to feel. I merely exist now. I’ve existed for a long time." I