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| Firebender01 2008-10-03 ch 1, | abuseThis is great, and they're all in character. well done! |
| Albus Paulson 2008-07-18 ch 1, | abuseThis is kinda cool. The characters are well-done, and I like that in a fic. Good job. |
| lfvoy 2008-05-11 ch 1, | abuseAll I know about Avatar I learned from reading Wikipedia...but I liked this one anyway. It's nice to see how the conversation segues along with the feelings involved, from jealousy to boasting to sadness to sympathy. And in less than a thousand words! How do you DO that? |
| Liooness 2008-04-21 ch 1, | abusegreat story, and i can see them doing that kind of stuff. love it |
| kitkat1327 2008-01-21 ch 1, | abusehaha, I like this |
| GirlWaterShaman 2008-01-21 ch 1, | abuseaw, this is cute! They're in character, too. Good job! :) |
| MastaDrumma22 2008-01-20 ch 1, | abuseNice! I love the story! |
| Daisy Snapdragon 2008-01-20 ch 1, | abuseNice on mother!!1 Loved it... but I told you that already. Yeah that's my mom ya'll!1 Love ya! And very good job!!1 |
| Avatargirl92 2008-01-20 ch 1, | abuseTO THE IDIOT-MOBILE! I'm putting this and your other story in my C2. |