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Reviews For: Oneupmanship

Firebender01
2008-10-03
ch 1,
abuseThis is great, and they're all in character.
well done!
Albus Paulson
2008-07-18
ch 1,
abuseThis is kinda cool. The characters are well-done, and I like that in a fic. Good job.
lfvoy
2008-05-11
ch 1,
abuseAll I know about Avatar I learned from reading Wikipedia...but I liked this one anyway. It's nice to see how the conversation segues along with the feelings involved, from jealousy to boasting to sadness to sympathy. And in less than a thousand words! How do you DO that?
Liooness
2008-04-21
ch 1,
abusegreat story, and i can see them doing that kind of stuff. love it
kitkat1327
2008-01-21
ch 1,
abusehaha, I like this
GirlWaterShaman
2008-01-21
ch 1,
abuseaw, this is cute! They're in character, too. Good job! :)
MastaDrumma22
2008-01-20
ch 1,
abuseNice! I love the story!
Daisy Snapdragon
2008-01-20
ch 1,
abuseNice on mother!!1 Loved it... but I told you that already. Yeah that's my mom ya'll!1 Love ya! And very good job!!1
Avatargirl92
2008-01-20
ch 1,
abuseTO THE IDIOT-MOBILE!
I'm putting this and your other story in my C2.
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