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WithABunny 2008-07-11 ch 1,	abuseTrying out a new writing style? I wouldn't have guessed. I'm pretty sure that this is one of the best FMA fics I've read, to be honest. There's angst here, to be sure, but it isn't the kind that induces sobfests. Instead, it's the kind that actually made me stare at the screen for a while going, "Wow." Oh, while feeling depressed at the same time. But it was a good depression, though. There's also a flow to this story that I like. Everything that happens is just neatly connected to the next, and the beginning and end are tied together like a knot. Amazing, just amazing.
AiVixen 2008-05-30 ch 1,	abuse"He was done with souls." = The most genius, touching line I've read today. ;_; is crushed by the angst MURDERS Ed and cuddles Envy and groans, once again, under the weight of the angst I've gotta go find an uncharacteristically fluffy EnvyXEd now, all thanks to you! ;D
YukinoKara 2008-05-29 ch 1,	abuseuwah~ gets crushed by angst wow; so well written but so sad~ T_T
Holy'Shrimp 2008-04-10 ch 1,	abuseGosh, I shouldn't have listened to FAKE?'s "dream catcher" while reading this, truly it just matches so much that i can't help feeling way too concerned! Poor, poor Envy... And poor Al! That's just horrible! Oh dear, this writing style is amazing, really, and the story was just beautiful (it's true! Blunt, get out of my body!). Thank you for writing this, really!
Spirix 2008-03-15 ch 1,	abuseThis fic actually reminds me a lot of me RoyEdEnvy fic, Place Between. You should read it. Anyways. I loved this. Great job, I have to go write ;) -rix
Clawdia 2008-02-20 ch 1,	abuseAfter reading this, I was completely rendered speachless. I'm not just saying that, either; The only thing that would come to mind was "Wow...just...wow." Which wouldn't exactly make for a satisfying review, eh? xD So I, being the melodramatic attentionwho--uhm..person I am, opened up Wordpad and pretyped the following gushiness. I can't think of a better way to describe what I've just written other than "Perfect." I love how you slowly built each event up and then crashed them together. You completely owned the new writing style you were trying out. And, come to think of it, this is your first Non-AU, isn't it? Well, you were successful at that too! I really think this is one of those stories that I can reread as many times as I like and still find something new to enjoy about it. Right now, there is one particular sentence that's jumping out at me, so I've got to congradulate you on it as well. "Envy watched the debate from his seat on the couch, the puppet - yet again - of two humans who had no idea how lucky they were." I loved the double-meaning here. (Or maybe it's even a triple meaning? I haven't the faintest idea, but it's pulling me in. xD)I really hope you liked the way this fic turned out. It'd be wonderful if you'd write up something else in this particular style, but as always that's up to you. xDD -- So yeah. >_> Needless to say, I loved this thing. xD
xxakikoakanexx 2008-01-24 ch 1,	abuseThis was absolutely wonderfully written, it portrayed Envy's character perfectly. It was so . . . I can't think of only one word to describe it. I would have to say that this is easily wins the title of your best FullMetal Aclhemist story. I think that you should continue this type of writing style.
Finnimbrun 2008-01-22 ch 1,	abuseYou know, I realize it's technically just a little one-shot, but this is easily your best FmA fic to date. The characterizations are more suited to FmA, the writing is fluid and more self-assured, and the piece has a lovely haunting quietness to it. This is my favourite kind of Ed/Envy: Quietly tragic, with bits of plot scattered throughout. I sincerely hope you write more stories in this particular vein. The one piece of concrit I have is: quotes followed by dialogue tags should end with commas. "I've finished thinking." he said, should be, "I've finished thinking," he said. Quotes are only followed by periods when there are no dialogue tags afterwards. Otherwise, good job. Take a bow, my dear, and prepare to surpass yourself, for this is your best to date.
kathy lee skyler 2008-01-21 ch 1,	abuseWait...that's all? It's SO GOOD and you only did one chapter? THAT WAS THE MOST AWESOMEST THING I'VE EVER, EVER READ! MAKE MORE OR YOU WILL DIE! (by being forced to eat too much cookies)
LadyLapisLazuli 2008-01-21 ch 1,	abuseWow. Just wow. That was powerful. Wonderful characterisation of Envy, and great descriptions. Homunculi really are anti-humans. I feel terrible for him, because he was beginning to understand the value of lives a little, then had his heart, well, anti-heart broken. :D
Taranova 2008-01-20 ch 1,	abuseThat was remarkably sad. :( I'm so ** at Ed. This was really quite beautifully written, by the way.
UnbornHope 2008-01-20 ch 1,	abuseI-I actually cried at this... this was simply beautiful... i wish there was some sort of sequil ;-;... truly ... i cant even think of a word... wonderful... thatll do. ;-;
Godell 2008-01-20 ch 1,	abuse...Wow. This is a much serious work than what you've done before. It's really beautifully written, I must say. :D KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! Godell
Sin Of Tragedy 2008-01-20 ch 1,	abuseoh...my...God...huggles Envy-dono this was beautifuly done!! 1,0,0 out of 5! XD But as I said, this was a work of art! I cried for Envy, though, but that is what makes it so grand! o.o I'll be waiting for the next chapter!!
lost cause331 2008-01-20 ch 1,	abuseThat was ... sad. But it was deffinatly good. I wonder if Al's ghost is crying?

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