I don't get the story really i mean its kind of confusing. but it is a great story but i would appriceiate (sp) it if you kind of helped me to understand. LOVE IT THOUGH!UPDATE ASAP!

1. And please don't reveal all the secrets to the reader because really would profesional authors do it? No. We, the readers, along with Bella, the character, should be on the same page for the work of mystery to really mean something. I mean if we already knew who was who, we would not be obligated to read the rest of the story, the one you spend countless hours writing and fabricating.

2. It would be a real shame if you revealed all the secrets before the climax. It would be an anticlimax even before the story ends.

3. It takes time and extended passages to betray secrets, not mere sentences included in the author's note.

KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.

Please update, the story is absolutely AMAZING!
I have never ever read anything like this before, and that is saying something. wow.
It must have taken you long periods of time and numerous migraines to structure this story. It's so complicated, you really have to read it. So I have only one question.
Were they like five-tuplets? sorry I don't know the term for it

Erm... I'm confused. no offence. I just can't seem to get what's going on. It's so confusing! Maybe you should let the readers understand everything, but have Bella not understand yet... it would be a lot easier to comprehend. Also! The... girl... Bella... has to be Bella, otherwise, Edward would't care for her like he does. Only, and I repeat: ONLY Edward and Bella belong together. ONLY! So, if he has those feelings, then it must be the real Belaa! I'm smart! Lol, just kidding. But tha's my theory. If you don't make it so confusing, then I can guarantee you will have more readers, though. Good luck! Thank you for posting this! Update as soon as you can!
~ Kaylyn AKA ObsessedFan16 ^_~

ok-ay i am officially confused!! can u quickly go over the story? por faovr?

I think you should carry the story further, i really like how it not all in one persons piont o view, and i really like how the plot is turning out so far it can go in somany directions

and it might actully be fun to write.lol i want to start a store like this now. ha ha. to bad i cant write for crap.

I don't get any of this.

No, not too much romance. Hmm, maybe a bit cliche, but it's all still unfolding, so I can't really criticize anything too much. I'm confused, but I'm starting to understand enough where I can still be intrigued. I still don't quite understand what's going on between Edward and Bella though.

I think the song title will fit very well, more than you may have thought in the beginning. It's playing everytime I read x]

Oh, how we regret those things we do. And all I was doing was trying to save my own skin, oh, but so were you. So were you. Ya know, I think this will all work out perfectly with the song.

"With the memories, however, came confusion." Yeah, tell me about it.

Aha, firefigherness. Hmm, this is all very 'ooh, plot thickening'.

*stares with furrowed brow* *clicks on next chapter*

I can review! Yippy! Hm, maybe 'yippy' was a bit over the top. Anyways, wow. Intriguing. Confusing, but still.

This is great update soon

okee doke. very gud as usual XD yeh slightlee confused bout the memory...i wanna know wot happenz nxt! XD

It's a bit confusing, but I like your story anyway. I'm sure that with more chapters everything will be explained. Please update soon!