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Reviews For: Darker Shades of Innocence

DeLyse
2008-04-03
ch 1,
abuseBeautiful description - I followed it as though I was watching it like a movie. I didn't think it was too dark to be dark, either. After all, darkness is limitless, and anything above it is just gray or white.

Keep up the wonderful work, and I vote for a second chapter! ;)
MysticSpiritus
2008-02-01
ch 1,
abuseIt's certainly dark, but beautifully written. I hope you'll write a second chapter.

Mystic
Masamune'sSong
2008-01-21
ch 1,
abuseWell... This Sephiroth doesn't seem in any danger of repenting. I like the rough stuff as much as the next gal-- more than most, probably, but the strangulation and bloodletting stuff was a bit much for me. I see Aeris as too spunky to get herself whipped like this.

I like Sephiroth's lines and some of the description here, though. ^^
Shineko
2008-01-21
ch 1, anon.
abuseI'm not really sure if I like this or not...
You do have talent for writing and even thought I usually
like dark AeriSeph fic's this just may be too dark for me :D.
But if you will write a second chapter I will probaply read it.
Thank you.
moonshadow09
2008-01-20
ch 1,
abuseoh my goodness that was amazing, i love it how you kept Sephiroth in character, i'm a speechless.
keep up the amazing work.
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