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| DeLyse 2008-04-03 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful description - I followed it as though I was watching it like a movie. I didn't think it was too dark to be dark, either. After all, darkness is limitless, and anything above it is just gray or white. Keep up the wonderful work, and I vote for a second chapter! ;) |
| MysticSpiritus 2008-02-01 ch 1, | abuseIt's certainly dark, but beautifully written. I hope you'll write a second chapter. Mystic |
| Masamune'sSong 2008-01-21 ch 1, | abuseWell... This Sephiroth doesn't seem in any danger of repenting. I like the rough stuff as much as the next gal-- more than most, probably, but the strangulation and bloodletting stuff was a bit much for me. I see Aeris as too spunky to get herself whipped like this. I like Sephiroth's lines and some of the description here, though. ^^ |
| Shineko 2008-01-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseI'm not really sure if I like this or not... You do have talent for writing and even thought I usually like dark AeriSeph fic's this just may be too dark for me :D. But if you will write a second chapter I will probaply read it. Thank you. |
| moonshadow09 2008-01-20 ch 1, | abuseoh my goodness that was amazing, i love it how you kept Sephiroth in character, i'm a speechless. keep up the amazing work. |