please continue! I saw your video on youtube and loved the idea!

Interesting start. Keep going.
Ciao! -DP

Sad, but beautifully written...

I like your youtube videos. :]

come on. u can't just give us an awesome story and give up. thats not cool. update please.

OK,this is actually belivable Daley would do anything to stay in control.And I'm so glad I'm not the only DaleyEric fan I Nathan.
Daley and Eric rmind me of Kate and Sawyer and Nathan reminds me of stuck up, know it all JACK!God,I him!(Plus, ERic's hat is y);)

Wow. Update.
Did you make the video of that on youtube?

update this is really good so far. please update.

Awesome. I'm so happy that you wrote this.
I saw the video about a month ago and kept thinking about it, and when I saw the summary my heart skipped a beat.
Nice start, keep it up.

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omg so sad, poor daley.

update

OMG! I love Daley angst. Update soon.