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| FantasyFan5 2008-06-30 ch 1, | abuseThat was really good. There aren't many stories that really reflect on Iggy's blindness, and I really liked this one! If you like reading Iggy, check out chapter three of my story 10 Secrets of the MR Characters. Review, and if you want to flame, it'll be used to roast Lissa. =D |
| Unlaced Opheliac 2008-06-14 ch 1, | abuseI really really liked that. *saves to favs* Iggy is like my favourite character in MR and so I get so happy when I discover a good FF on him. (In the middle of creating my own atm but not to sure how it's going - yes this is shameless publicing). I got so very angry when someone stuck that sign on him. I literally had smoke coming out of my ears. Anyhoo, great story. x |
| Kai Kitsune 2008-06-04 ch 1, | abuseWow. That has a lot of power behind it. I really like this story. ^^ |
| Adrienne-sensei 2008-05-26 ch 1, | abuseWow. This is just...wow. Iggy is so, so strong--I never really thought of what must be going on inside his head. This is incredible. |
| Darth Atkid 2008-05-12 ch 1, | abuseAmazing work. It does make an excellent monologue. |
| -Aikio-Hatate- 2008-05-07 ch 1, | abuseaw ill confort Iggy! |
| History Buff 1990 2008-04-19 ch 1, | abuseThis one may be short, but is definitely a good read. Well done, I like it. |
| loved1 2008-03-02 ch 1, | abusei liked it. poor iggy. i'd HATEv to be blind. |
| ChocolateMilk2 2008-02-29 ch 1, | abuseOuch. I feel Iggy's pain. Though I can't see him admitting this to anyone, unless he was in a horrible mood. Still, it seems a bit arrogant. Just writhing in self-pity like that. Maybe I could imagine him blaming it out on the Erasers too. That might be going a bit off topic, however. But you pulled of the characterization pretty well. Couldn't imagine Fang or Max or Angel complaining like that. Possibly Nudge or Gazzy. I like how you reminscise on how he used to be able to see and all. Now, if it was only a little longer... |
| Ash 2008-02-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was pretty dec'. I really liked it! It was sad (on my part), it took me like, two seconds to get what the heck 'kick me' meant. I read your pro. I like hawt guys, too! Keep on writing, disneydork! **Ash** |
| anonymouse13 2008-02-08 ch 1, | abuseWhat? I've SO reviewed this already. Or at least... I thought I had. Maybe I haven't. Oh well. This is incredibly sad and amazing and wonderful and I love it. But in the first sentence of the second-to-last paragraph you forgot to put in a question mark. Because it's a question... Yeah. Sorry, I'm a grammar freak. Grammar is fun. But other than that, you're golden. Great job! |
| Fanggurly 2008-01-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseAW! this is soo sweetly depressing (if that makes sense)! u really like to wirte about iggy dont u??! |
| mergirl007 2008-01-22 ch 1, | abuseIggy's more angry than angsty- did you intend for that to happen? I like the mention of not being able to see his little sister. Overall, I think this is more suited to dramatic performance than just a written fic. Some of it just needs the special inflection that only acting can give it- there are so many possible nuances, and you don't really clarify them in this. But I think the overall idea was a good one, and I would just enjoy seeing this in a longer story, with more time taken to evaluate Iggy's thoughts. Hope you did okay on the monologue! -)Mer(- |
| MRACR 2008-01-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow. I really liked that. It was very deep, and probably really true. But I've got to tell you, it's not so good on the self-confidence to see you putting out this oneshot and getting over 10 reviews before it leaves the first page, while, for example, my oneshot called "Ranger" is on page who-knows-what by now and it's got one, count it, one review. But I don't begrudge you your reviews. You deserve them! :) |
| RandomlyCheesey 2008-01-20 ch 1, | abusei like it is shows that being blind is something not everyone relizes and how much it affects people.. good job |