great awsome keep it up and post more soon, rock on! peace:)

this is really good! Please update soon!!

mehe good luck with that kim. i doubt dr director would understand but then again, her sentence could be lifted/reduced for information, ya never know depends on the story.

liked it please update soon

kitty =^_^=

damn that was good, i like

The basic premise is quite good, but it's really rushed and there's not much description. Also, writing all the lyrics was unnecessary and the chorus needed to only have been written once. I just hope it improves in later chapters.

Ah yes but the question remains will Dr. Director agree to letting Kim take custody of Shego provided Shego can make a deal?? update soon

Well the fic seems a bit rushed, no real plot going on excet the sudden Kigo in it, hope the future chapters improve.

Invader Johnny Signing Off.

Wow...
::I second that wow...::
More, More, More!!
:: Please! Update this soon!::
What is going to happen?!
:: She won't kill herself right?::
I like this chapter better...and I need to do what Kim was going to do...
:: What kiss Shego?::
No! I need to find these songs!
:: Oh Right!::
*Gives Dani weird look*
:: Gives Becky weird look Back::
Ok! Well My Dear Psycho! *Grins* I am afraid that between these two chapters you have gotten rid of all my extra cookies...This chapter got extra ones...and the ones from last chapter so you have a larger lot...
:: Which she see's as a good thing...::
I get to make cookies tonight!YAY!
::Well please update again soon Psycho!!::
yes you must!! I feel like jumping up and down! *Shrugs then starts jumping up and down*
:: Well we are off now...hope to hear from you soon...::
Dani...phone for you...
:: Huh?::
Mum said someone is on the phone for you...
:: Ok...Bye Psycho!::
Bye! *Hand over two muffin baskets full of different kinds of cookies* That should be enough for you and all of your voice-y shadows *Grins* Enjoy!

Becky Silver Black

Cool...I like this idea...I haven't heard of this one before either...
:: Next chapter! Next Chapter!::
You've been with Dan again haven't you?
:: Well I had to do something while you were out didn't I?::
*Sighs* Well I like this song too...Anyways we are going to read the next chapter so more soon!
No cookies from this one...they will be included in chapter two's review!
:: Slips Cookie to Psycho while Becky signs review *Winks to Psycho*::

Becky Silver Black