aw this was brilliant :)

loved how you wrote this hun :)

xx

Intreasting fic, loved the fight scene

great story

Liked the revenge, loved the hurt!Dean, though still don't quite get how he didn't get shot at point blank range.

this was really great.

quite the perfect ending.

poor sammy...him and dean both need therapy lots and lots of therapy lol.

I loved it!

Great story, But..., okay, I can go with Sam possibly having powers enough to hold the brother in place while he beats on him and making his gun be out of reach, but what was up with the bit about Dean and the bullet? Made me curious. No one ever mentioned the removal of the bullet. Was there anything to that, or was that just something to throw us off further? And are you going to do more of this story as you set up for sequels with the "who is following them and why?" bit? Sorry if this sounds critical, don't mean for it to. You are really a very talented writer, otherwise I wouldn't care about these things. Please keep writing, but maybe answer more of the questions involved in the story before deciding to end it. Thanks for sharing your talent. Keep up the good work.

as soon as i read "limp!sam AND limp!dean" i knew i had to read this lol.

porr dean!

poor sammy!

that jerk michael...he's now on my list somewhere in between the crazy people in the benders and jake that must be hunted down and tortured.

oh please please please please write another chapter.

I'll beg if i must...pretty please...(sam's puppy dog eyes) please!

this is awesome and i need more cute brotherlyness.

A nice ruthless and blood-thirsty chapter.
just the way it should be!

Yes do please write more...

kind regards,
ST.x.

Wait wasn't Dean shot in the head?

By the way, Sam's puppy dog eyes don't work on me, I'm a Deangirl so only three things work, emerald eyes that burn me straight to ash, the fullest lips I've ever seen on a man quirked into the sexiest smile ever filmed, or a story I like. You got me with the last one.

Great story, please do a second chapter of them in the hospital! Hope to see it up soon!

Awesome chapter, but it definitely needs another chapter with the brothers recovering in the hospital--and Michael paying for what he tried to do to Sam and Dean!

I just wish Jess could have appeared at the time to let Michael know how wrong he was about Sammy!