this is awesome! very funny! :)

I'm not going to say anything harsh or rude,but the site has a lot of good beta readers and they can help you out a lot.

oh my gosh, i love this, i was lauging so hard and my brother noww thinks im crazier than i acctualy am but it's so worth it, anyway this iis really good keep it up ;)

Hey this story is pretty good keep going i like it

Col. Yay! :D

Oh dear. . .

I like it. lol 'We're movie stars!' XD That made me laugh.

Can you put spaces in between the dialouge things? Pwease? lol

Before I begin my rant, I would like to say that if you take out the insults and the b.i.t.c.h.y. comments, their are some words of knoweledge in here.

The idea, is so overused it's not even funny. Come up with something we haven't heard of, please? Next, the way you format your story is just horrible! It's all crammed together! Nobody wants to read that s.h.i.t. since it's so confusing! Ever heard of a thing called the Enter key? It's what you use to seperate paragraphs! Try it, next time.

It's nothing but a bunch of dialogue. No descriptions, no scenery, nothing. And it's boring as hell. If you're going to write something that sucks, you could at least throw a little bit of description in there. And I agree with Acranum Paradox, I can see you guys sitting in front of a pink, barbie computer and fantasizing about the Greasers, which shows how immature and fangirl-ish the writing is.

Moving on to the second chapter:

Okay, it's just like the first. Worthless dribble. I'd keep reading but I feel like I've lost enough IQ points already.

Go ahead, get mad, do whatever, but at least I'm not lying to you. I really am trying to help you, even if it sounds mean.

Peace. Love. Emoness.

This idea is so cliched and overused it's not even funny. The entire fic is nothing but dialogue, not a stitch of details such as environment, character descriptions, etc. Titles, even for the chapters, should be capitalized.

Your punctuation is either terrible or non-existent.

This piece of crap looks like you and a group of friends sat in front of your pink barbie computer and fantasized about love with our beloved greasers.

The writing is atrocious, which is why the only reviewer has been Nightwing13, who is the worst writer I've seen. Her work is horrible, please, for the love of Dallas, fix this mess.

awesome i loved it when Alexa punched Autumn in the nose! Please update!

awesome chapter! please update

this story is awesome! please update!

OH my gosh that was so funny when the girls dropped food on the socs. I love your story. please update!

P.S.
Greasers rule!!

i love it please update!'
and what happened to Johnny where was he sleeping?

this story is so funny! I like how Two-Bit wrote on their cheeks please update!

So far i'm laughing please update!