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| Flash Foreward 2008-08-20 ch 1,  | abuseA wonderful look at Harry's reasoning for naming Albus Severus as he did, and a very plausible reason. Great work. |
| Prieda Solo 2008-02-04 ch 1, | abuseVery nice! I love this concept, and you've written it very well, covering wuite a few important issues in a small space of time. Harry is in character as well, it is the sort of thing he'd do :) And I do like that Albus becomes friends with Scorpius, that's something I've always seen happening . One suggesting would be that when you write, try to leave a line between paragraphs. it makes it easier to read and the format is more accessible. Great work =D |
| kitty-re 2008-01-21 ch 1, | abuseHm, this view on the naming is interesting. Do not think I am insulting you, for it is written very very well. I am just disagreeing with the idea of it. For in Deathly Hallows Harry walks into deaths open arms, accepting it. Perhaps he accepted it, because he knew it was the only path Dumbledore left him? I like to think, he accepted it because in this one case he believe that to sacrifice himself would be an honourable and right thing to do. I guess I don't really know how to put my thoughts into words. But your writing definately made me think. I applaude you. |
| QuantumFruitPunch 2008-01-20 ch 1, | abusehmm.. interesting outlook on it. to be honest, i have always thought it was peculiar that he named his second son after dumbledore/snape after the whole "greater good" thing. I like this explanation! |