I found this surprisingly out of character, choppy, and annoying. I have nothing at all against sex scenes, but I thought that this one was demeaning to starfire and robin because of how immature and crass robin was. It made me cringe when robin said he wanted to have sex with star because she was the hottest girl he'd seen and that he'd be lucky to do her. It felt like you skipped to a hurried and emotionless sex scene just for the hell of it without considering the personalitites of the characters. I felt like you stripped alot of depth and emotion from them in relation to sex, and that took alot of the appeal out of the story for me.

Also, while cyborg and bb do play pranks and get irritating and hurt people sometimes, I felt it was out of character for them to be that immature and annoying, and I think that raven would have shut them up sooner.

This made me laugh hysterically. I loved it! And the fact that nerdy-ass control freak joined in on the fun made it that much better.

Perfect!

Could not be better (:

My gawd...

My effing GAWD!

HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

Dude, you're killing me. That was hilarious! For a few minutes, I didn't know what the hell Cyborg and BB were going on about, and then...

BAHAHAHAHA! I can't believe Robin threw a fraking condom at Control Freak.

"WHAT WAS THAT FOR?"

"JUST INCASE!"

::wipes tears:: That made my day. :')

xD

Kudos to you for writing something like this. ;)

Lol! This is too, funny. You two did a great job here.

I can't believe I never reviewed this one either! Its funny, its well written, its sexy - and its RobStar! Ergo, it is perfect! Bravo ladies!

LJ

The beginning was hilarious!! Burger King forgot to wrap his wapper! XD Genius! And you protrayed the characters very well. Robin freaking out about something with Starfire as usual, Starfire is very inoccent and curious, BB and Cy make jokes about it, and Raven practicaly says nothing, but inside she is laughing her butt off. I love the whole story!!

This fic was so cute and sweet it nearly gave me a toothache. LoL.

this was an awesome story i cant wait to read more stuff from you guys

The Object is wholesome, sumptuous fare. Sensual, and more. But, it doesn't feel like the typical Kryalla way of handling Dick and Kori. Well, we can't expect her "Orange coloured Cliffs, Locked Hearts" universe to inspire all her other works; thank the Lord they came our way.

Kryalla herself, possibly, isn't around to take this into account anymore. Still, let's hope that she knows we wish that she move on to the next and better chapter of her life.

i couldn't stop lafin at the beginning, and nice ending.

I absolutely LOVED that story!! It was so funny! I was laughing so hard at the first of the story, you guys are great! I hope you two decide to do another story, I'll definitely be reading it!

That was probably the funniest thing I've read in weeks, probably months. Great job. You gotta love Beast Boy and Cyborg.

I have never laughed so hard about a fan fic on this site. I was lucky that I was home alone or my room mates would have stormed into my room to see if I was being murderd. ^^

ROFLMAO! That story was AWSOME. And a great sex scene to boot. You guy's should do another with Rae an Cy or BB and Terra or maybe any combinations of people.