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| LovinSomeCSI 2008-01-26 ch 1, | abuseawesome! I would never, in a million years, have imagined that ship. You did a great job with it though. I am so glad you wrote a new fic, your work is always a pleasure to read. |
| Amanda Hawthorn 2008-01-26 ch 1, | abuseOMG...I almost choked on my coffee...when I eventually pick myself up off the floor I might even be able to speak in sentences again :D Okay, now I've read it I take your challenge...well as soon as I can stop laughing that is! |
| plkphoto 2008-01-23 ch 1, | abuseI can't believe I read the WHOLE thing... gah! That being said... Nicely written! I'm very impressed with your ability to beat completely bizarre plot bunnies into submission and come up with something not only readable but actually enjoyable... Also, what about a sequel... Sofia gets pregnant with Leonard's child and causes a new blip in the space/time continuum... JK, I think... :-) PLK |
| Mingsmommy 2008-01-22 ch 1, | abuseFavorite line: “I don’t know. I’m a detective, not a doctor!” This whole thing made me giggle with delight. Characerization was amazing, premise was wacky and brilliant. Amazing work. Amazing. |
| ScienceGeek 2008-01-21 ch 1, | abuseThat was adorable. Poor Sofia. Too bad McCoy didn't send her back with a note or something, but that might just have made it worse for her. Space Bears. LOL |
| diane 2008-01-21 ch 1, anon. | abusethat was wonderful...star trek and csi...who would have ever put the two together? but it was great...thanks for writing this, and glad to see something new from you. this is hilarious: “Given inflation, exchange factors and technological changes, I would roughly estimate that to be equivalent to two hundred eighty-seven million, four hundred ninety-two thousand, six hundred twelve dollars and ninety-seven cents from your time period.” Sofia stared at him for a long time. “Roughly estimate?” “There is some uncertainty in the historical records regarding inflationary factors. I may be off by as much as one hundred and thirty-seven dollars and nine cents.” “Is he for real?” she asked Bones. “I’m afraid so,” he grumbled. thank you again! |
| jtbwriter 2008-01-21 ch 1, | abuseOh..my...God! What a great story-and I don't even like Sofia! LOL! Thanks for a terrific ride-you did catch McCoy just right-and Kirk and his "intentions"...cute! Good work! |
| Joan Powers 2008-01-21 ch 1, | abuseThat was fun! So great to encounter the crew of the Enterprise again - so nicely in character. I can't stand Sofia yet you managed to construct a story in which she was palatable. Love the space bears! |
| Beuller 2008-01-21 ch 1, | abuseToo much fun! I'm very glad Sofia's life wasn't (b)ruined. Now, that would have been a grizzly tale. How do we get VR Trakowski to dare you more often? |
| Peggiegg 2008-01-21 ch 1, | abuseMossley is back! YEAH! And in rare form. Loved it! The Star Trek characterizations were dead on. If I could, I'd give it * (five stars) |
| Crystalwitch 2008-01-21 ch 1, | abuseLoved it! More, please! |
| 4NZic 2008-01-20 ch 1, | abuseThat was so weird, but highly entertaining. It's so nice to read a new story from you. As usual everyone was in character. It was so funny to suddenly switch from Land of the Bears to Star Trek. Actually, I'm at a loss to know what to say, it was crazy. Bear-zarre in fact! |
| xoxoPAUxoxo 2008-01-20 ch 1, | abuseLOL thanks for the laugh. Really Good fic. Pau =D PS. You keep writing about bears and I'll keep reading. |
| bordercollie 2008-01-20 ch 1, | abuseCool story - love it :-) |