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Reviews for: Change My Mind
iloveraven
2009-08-17 . chapter 1
i thought it was great
Jenndifurry
2008-09-30 . chapter 1
robin where's robin?
Kilarra
2008-09-17 . chapter 1
Sucked? Are you kidding me? That was great! I loved it, it was fluffy and serious and in character! I'm excited to see more! There were mood swings, but they fit and some funny phrases, but they sounded natural. My only criticism is that there were parts that were a bit on the wordy side, but that's kind of a guess and check, trial and error sort of thing that just takes time and practice to settle into. Lord knows I still talk too much and it's sometimes a little difficult to understand precisely what it is that I'm trying to communicate and or say, like my English teacher tells me, you know? *grin* Looks like I've got some competition! Love it, keep goin'!
Kilarra
volleyballchick94
2008-07-03 . chapter 1
not too bad
cRaZyMaN676
2008-07-03 . chapter 1
wow. your right, that Sucked BIG TIME. why is it a humor one again? anudda ting, what the hell happened to Rob face? he didn't die, did he? i hate the dude, but yeesh. dis is more like a drama thing.

still kinda good though.
Azamiko
2008-05-04 . chapter 1
^_^
Anonymous
2008-01-21 . chapter 1
not bad, people stayed in character, lol. which is getting rarer nowadays. nice job.
MistressofDawn
2008-01-21 . chapter 1
This was neat. 'nuff said.

God Bless!
Tears of Trees
2008-01-21 . chapter 1
That was sweet! It was a mushy Rae BB story were Rae wasn't totally out of charactor! :) Why did Robin leave? I feel so sorry for Star even though you didn't really say anything about her.
6StringSamurai13
2008-01-21 . chapter 1
Why would you think that sucked? That was really good! Excellent dialog mixed with really good characterizations of BB and Raven. The imagery was also really well done and I liked how you worked in the line from the drabble into the story. A cute, and not over-the-top fluffy way to end it that was just right. Keep up the excellent work, I can't wait to see more!
CĂ­cero
2008-01-21 . chapter 1
That was one REALLY nice fic.
You managed to keep all BB and Rae in character, and the story was simply suberb,
I only think that this Story genre should be Friendship instead of Romance. But it rocked anyway.
DarkF4s
2008-01-21 . chapter 1
SUCKED?!?!?! Are you kidding? It was awesome! This was one of the most adorable and loveable stories I've read (or heard for that matter)! I loved the subtle changes in Raven's mind and feelings as she gets closer to Beast Boy.

So, congrats on a really great story. And keep on writing, you rule! :))
JeMS7
2008-01-21 . chapter 1
It did not suck, I really liked it. You kept them in character, much better than most people do.
Kasamari
2008-01-20 . chapter 1
You have all the self confidence of a flopping fish in need of water. You're a good writer, and I enjoyed reading your work! Keep it up (^_^)
xHinata Uzumakix
2008-01-20 . chapter 1
that was so cool! kind of sad at first, ut got a lot nicer in the end. i love romance! can't help it *shrugs*
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