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| bitemeEdward121719 2008-07-22 ch 2, | abusewow this is really cool |
| yaoi-productions-19 2008-06-28 ch 1, | abuseI love! Thanks for your taltent! --Yuki/ Yaoi-chan |
| Artemis-Draco 2008-05-25 ch 2, | abusehurry and update danmit |
| Chibi Strawberry Neko 2008-05-14 ch 2, | abuseBum bum bum >o foxie naruto owns! |
| Sienna Maiu 2008-04-25 ch 2, | abuse"So.. nothing to actually say actually -.-'"? -Eurgh... sorry about that odd phrasing there, it was too late to change it since I only noticed it after I'd submitted the review. Okay so, I'm lovin' this, that's for sure :) How exactly is Naruto attempting to live a 'normal' life exactly? Surely everybody notices that he now has tails and ears on top of his head, instead of on the sides, as well as little kitsunes tailing him on occasion. I was totally reading that last chapter where he's in the bathroom, and was thinking about a friend of mine who cringes whenever I flash Naruto "spoilers" at him, because apparently he's not supposed to have "gotten attractive"... :P Sakura needs to do more stuff :( But I'm biased :P So yeah... still love it :P +Watch +Fav |
| Sienna Maiu 2008-04-25 ch 1, | abuseheh heh heh... *nice* So.. nothing to actually say actually -.-' I'm always ecstatic whenever I can find stories with this... relationship :P Makes me giddy in a sense I suppose, and the most awesome part? You have excellent writing patters. I relief from all the cruddy grammer I've been encountering lately. Well, I'm off to read more chapters ^-^ |
| mimifoxlove 2008-04-04 ch 2, | abuseHi You have my interested! Update Soon! mimi |
| red-crecent-moon 2008-03-08 ch 2, | abusei love this story so much right now so whats gonna happen? |
| Silent-Serpent 2008-02-20 ch 2, | abusewait... so Sasuke and Sakura don't know about Naruto's inheritance? I would think his appearance would make it kinda obvious... Continue Soon! |
| emhunter 2008-01-21 ch 1, | abusethis story is going to get very intresting |
| Dragon77 2008-01-21 ch 1, | abuseThis is a great story please continue writing and post again soon. |
| domini4eva 2008-01-21 ch 1, | abusei really like the idea for this story really good so far keep up the good work |
| dragon695 2008-01-21 ch 1, | abuseSounds interesting. It was well written. I only found a few cases of the wrong word (god instead of good), but otherwise good. I love Naruto when he exhibits traits of a fox, so I know I'm gonna enjoy this. I don't usually dig Sakura but, after reading Teamwork, I am willing to give this threesome a chance. I also like Naruto when he is at least portrayed properly as the person he is in canon. I can tell that you are of similar thinking. I guess I'll get over the seme/uke nonsense (I usually like the boys versatile 'cause it seems more real), I just hope you don't make Sasuke too OOC or girlish. I mean, I totally sympathetic from where you are coming from. I can not stand many of SasuNaru fics because they (predictably) make Sasuke out to be a god and Naruto out to be some fluffy, cowering mouse. Still, I like Sasuke to act as male as possible. I guess I just like it when they act like, you know, men. But anyway, enough of that, it is your story and I'm sure you'll do as you please. I look forward to reading future chapters. |