HA! I WIN! :)

so. Saffron's got herself a new idiot. (I hope I'm right about this one)

A well done story. I don't think you should change it unless you want to expand on the epilogue. I felt that it was to short for it's own good and you should put a time stamp (how long ago it was) because by Serenity (the movie) only wight months have passed.

Otherwise a good story all around.

Very sweet! But great sad ending!

Yeah, your story ended somewhat badly. But you had my interest the whole time. Good job on making it easy to read (not making one long paragraph for the whole story).

I just registered with this site yesterday after spending two weeks reading A LOT of Firefly stories.

I look forward to reading more of yours in the future. And when I post my first story, I would like your opinion as well.

I love River she is my favorite character. Please write more soon. Thanks!

i liked the chapter. i think river is getting out of character slightly. i liked hero's personality. the banter about virgins and sex was funny. good job. look forward to an update.

That was a good chapter. the characters seem very in cannon.

i'm going on to read the next few chapters.

hey, this is good!

Good beginning! I like the focus on Book at the end, finally someone exploring his Shepherd side, not just the mystery of him.

Just one niggle, at the beginning.. if Mal shot a client of Inara's dead for no real reason, she wouldn't just be angry. She'd be horrified and scared of Mal and leave the ship asap. So, I'd recommend changing that to something else, just so it'll match the good quality of the rest of your writing. :)

Looking forward to more!