A great story. Very good.

I want to attack Charlie Brown. Your characterization of him was wonderful.

This was really original while still staying true to the characters. I don't think I've ever read a Peanuts continuation fic before. I hope you get inspired to do more in the future.

This is Good.

I like.

--Doc--

Well done! Nice job of projecting Charlie's 'luck', and all characters retain their personalities.