 Kris (Team Chair) 2009-10-26 . chapter 22 I just wanted to leave a little review and say that this story was AMAZING! I loved every second of it. Brilliantly written :) |
 Andrea 2008-12-19 . chapter 22 This was one of the best stories on the entire website I have ever read. It had a little of everything in it. The things I didn't like were just character preferences. I thought Chuck was slightly too emotional, but it doesn't really matter.
It seems that whatever college you are at your learning lots of amazing skills. I am sure you will become a well-known writer in the future.
I look forward to future stories.
Love,
Andrea |
 moarchair247 2008-11-12 . chapter 22This story is EPIC. Just awesome. Great character development, the plot twists were believable and of course a) we all wish Eleanor could be that cool of a mom and b) Bart's reconciliation with Chuck is the best, better and more satisfying than anything the actual show could serve up.
Excellent work! |
 cordeliamarie 2008-10-09 . chapter 22omg that was like the best fanfic everr. loved it! :]] |
 Noirreigne 2008-10-07 . chapter 7What a mess.
Of course Nate had to come and ruin everything. |
 Noirreigne 2008-10-07 . chapter 6Chuck is totally her knight in shinning armour.
I love she is wearing his clothes. I don't think he ever lets his casual conquests wear his clothes. He must really care.
Nice conversation between Eleanor and B. |
 Noirreigne 2008-10-07 . chapter 5Ugh. Nate.
“People in our lives, in our society, always tend to paint a certain picture for everyone. When they look at Chuck, they see a womanizer who loves to drink and party. When they look at Nate, they see the perfect son and the perfect boyfriend.”
Very true. B is finally take a hard look at the those around her.
How stupid is Nate? Glad that Nate layed it out for him.
When she reached him, she grabbed his hand and began leading Chuck onto the dance floor to his surprise as Ayo Technology began playing in the background by 50 Cent and Justin Timberlake. Once they were on the dance floor, Blair stepped incredibly close to him and began moving slowly to the music. As she swayed her hips from side to side, she turned so her back was pressed firmly into him. She took his hands in hers and guided them around her body as Chuck stared at her in shock. As the music played in the background, she turned to face him and moved her hands to the hem of his shirt. Slipping her hands under the cloth, she began digging her finger nails into his skin while pressing her lips into his neck, sending an electric shock through his body and driving him crazy. Their dance was slow and seductive as she placed a kiss onto his hot skin while his hands moved to her back. Pulling her closer to him, he simply gazed at her as Blair’s hands moved up to his chest under his shirt and slowly dragged her nails up and down his skin. His hands moved into her hair and he pulled her face somewhat back to fully gaze at her. Her eyes sparkled in the light that shined around the club. Just as he was about to lean forward and capture her mouth with his, Chuck’s eyes caught hold of something. Focusing a bit more on it, he noticed Nate and Serena arguing quietly as held onto the blond tightly. Realizing the reason behind Blair’s sudden seduction on the dance floor, he pulled away from her and untangled his hands from her hair.
This is so good! Of course Nate had to ruin it. |
 Noirreigne 2008-10-07 . chapter 4Dreaming of giant butterflies? lol
I love that C take her to his mother's grave. Very sweet. |
 Noirreigne 2008-10-07 . chapter 3I loved that B slapped N! I would love to see that on the show.
*sigh* Chuck and those butterflies. I like that you are taking the show and trying a different direction. |
 Noirreigne 2008-10-07 . chapter 2Chuck the voice of wisdom. I like how you are setting this up. The friendship that is there between Blair and Chuck. How comfortable they are together. |
 Noirreigne 2008-10-07 . chapter 1Poor Blair. Always obsessed with perfection.
Nice opening chapter. I think this is one of the first stories where B thinks about breaking up with Nate before Victor/Victrola. Interesting. |
 princetongirl 2008-06-27 . chapter 22LOVED IT UPDATE SOON |
 xxktnxx 2008-06-24 . chapter 22awesome chapter. this fic is awesome. |
 Bianca 2008-06-11 . chapter 22 Hey ChokolateKiss,
thanx for this fic its the best. there aren't many Blair/Chuck and there should be alot more. i think this has great potential for a sequel, maybe how things go when Nate comes back, and possibly throw in a Miss Georgina Sparks? i like and i'd love to see how much damage the Queen B and Playboy Prince of the Upper East Side when someone messes with their friends.
Please keep writing, Bianca. |
 CammieSwan1785 2008-05-31 . chapter 22continue please! |