 darkwolf227 2009-06-12 . chapter 4dang!! more star wars? |
 darkwolf227 2009-06-12 . chapter 2lol dude whats with all the star wars junk?lol |
 Raven of Alaska 2008-03-02 . chapter 6Beast Boy.What the Titans will sorely miss. A friend. Nay, a brother. That's how I view the Titans. Family,brothers and sisters to one another. Family forever. Either Beast Boy or one of them will die. And, in the darkness, that is what the Titans will sorely miss.
Sincerly,
Raven of Alaska |
 Galbinus 2008-02-24 . chapter 5Slade is Nightwing? This is turning out to be quite interesting.. Never expected that of old Slady.
Anyway, please update soon! I think that the plot is turning out to be quite fantastic. The random bits [e.g. Snape Moody] are quite hilarious, though I advise you not to add TOO many of them in there. One or two per chapter is more than enough. ;)
Great job, though. I think that the characters are in-character most of the time. Beast Boy is a little too subtle in his movements, though. ;P Raven is a little OOC sometimes (especially when she blushed. Changing 'blushed' to 'flushed' would be slightly more Raven-like, though).
Well, update soon!
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 Raven of Alaska 2008-01-30 . chapter 4Who is he?! Is it Robin's brother? Batman? The chicken-man who tortured him in first grade? Please, answer this soon!
Sincerly,
Raven of Alaska |
 ProdigiousDiscourse 2008-01-29 . chapter 3Okay thats a good chapter and all except you put that Beast Boy got a burger, and here I am screaming in my head BURGER!? Beast Boy doesn't eat meat so a tofu burger or something is what you meant right? |
 Raven of Alaska 2008-01-28 . chapter 3So, Slade has a nuke under Titans Tower? Very interesting.I wonder what Slade wants to talk about with Robin. World domination. Apprenticeship again? Something more sinister? Can't wait, please update soon! Oh, and after BB leads Robin to Slade, don't have the Titans treat him harshly. Please?
Sincerly,
Raven of Alaska |
 Galbinus 2008-01-28 . chapter 3LoL, Slade is cool. :D
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 Galbinus 2008-01-23 . chapter 2LoL.
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 megabouncer 2008-01-23 . chapter 2Thanx for telling me the spells xD |
 Galbinus 2008-01-22 . chapter 1Lol, it's good, Widdlemao. :D Like I've said before, I think it's a pretty original idea, though I haven't read a whole bunch of TT fanfiction to say this. :P
Anyway, please update soon.
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 therockstar2005 2008-01-21 . chapter 1I do like this idea. It seemed to be a little bit scatterbrained at the beginning, and just had a lot of random ideas occuring, but the twist at the end was good. Keep up with this.
Oh, and Raven says 'Azerath, Metrion, Zinthos' if you care to put it in. Not sure of the spelling, but whatever. |