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| Sierra Janeway 2008-02-04 ch 3,  | abusePretty good. :) You still might want to slow it down a little bit, but overall, good. :) I especially like the part about her only being really interested in the bookcase, the fish tank, and the washing machine. :D |
| Sierra Janeway 2008-01-29 ch 2, | abuseThings are moving a little quickly, and you might want to expand a little on why Mulder's volunteering to take her in and as to why he's so curious about her, but all in all, another great chapter. I've just recently begun watching X-Files, so it's nice to have something X-Files to read when I'm away from a TV. :) |
| Sierra Janeway 2008-01-29 ch 1, | abuseInteresting idea. I'm anxious to read more. :) |
| AimeImmortel 2008-01-25 ch 2, | abuseGreat start! Keep going, i'm very intrigued. |
| tanith75 2008-01-25 ch 2, | abuseThis is really good. I can't wait to read more!! Keep it up :) |