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| RageFeline 2008-09-19 ch 4,  | abuseAwesome! Thank you for updating again! The only problem was that you forgot to capitalize the 'G' in 'Gray.' Very nice, though. |
| namiholdjoo 2008-08-16 ch 4, anon. | abusecool i little confused with the whole day and night thing are you going to fix it? this one doesn't seem edited enough like the other chapters, but good work can't wait for the extension |
| sam 2008-08-15 ch 4, anon. | abuse... woah... must have chapter 5... |
| drakdragon 2008-05-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseits great! |
| RageFeline 2008-05-07 ch 1, | abuseVery graphic, but very nice. |
| . 2008-05-01 ch 3, anon. | abuseomg its awesome *.* keep it up |
| Tutsuya 2008-03-07 ch 3, anon. | abusethat was awsome can you make the next capter soon please? |
| Windstorm025 2008-03-03 ch 3, anon. | abuseUr story is awesome! keep it up! lol, Gray's my favorite character as well. ouch, man, after reading the second chapter, i feel really sorry for Gray. Keep goin! I wanna read more! (not pressing you to write, but u know what i mean) |
| Seby-chan 2008-02-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is a very interesting and descriptive story. Mind the spelling though. Proof reading is the key to fixing up misspelt words. Nicely done. |
| Nugget 2008-02-22 ch 3, anon. | abuseAGH! THE SUSPENSE! Great story! "...Follow the bloody rain..." |
| coolcat 2008-02-22 ch 3, anon. | abuseAh! no they have to find him! Gray is gonna die! i can see it now! |
| cookie 2008-02-22 ch 3, anon. | abusewow surprise there... O.o i really thought they were going to find him in this chapter... |
| Nugget 2008-02-19 ch 2, anon. | abuseOuch! Very descriptive. |
| Nugget 2008-02-19 ch 1, anon. | abusePretty good. Gray's my fav. too! |
| Assado the Angel- cat 2008-02-18 ch 2, anon. | abuseGray...00 |