I think you did a fantastic job with this story; everything flowed together and the way you described things was breathtaking. Bravo: I was left breathless.
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Your story-you know how people on tumblr call the really devastating actors, actresses and directors life runners? We're so hung up on their stuff that we can't focus on life.

You my friend, are a life ruiner. This story was too amazing. Couldn't leave it for anything. How do you even do this? Being this good should be illegal.

Ahhhhhh, I can't get over the story! The complex psychology, the tension... That's it. I should stop reading synlets now. It's just downhill from here.

Where did you pull this from? This was just a whole bunch of awesome. I don't even. I can't. I might have to review again later because I'm just in the throes of post-amazing-story-shock right now, so any reviews from me won't be all that eloquent/meaningful.

But oh my gosh. Tell me about harker. Tell me about mr. Incredible.

Yes

I'm done.

That was great.

Thank you so much for that.
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It's so beautiful and I am so glad to have ever read it. No words can describe how amazing this is and I hope you never stop writing.

Wow. Just wow. I don't think there is any better word to describe this story than 'awesome'. And seeing as I'm British I dot tend to us that word very often atall but it was. The metaphors, similes, descriptions, everything! Was just awesome. I have never read a better story in all the time I have been. Reading fanfictions. I can imagine this being published and a movie and every detail would be perfect. Each and every character was soo deep and mysterious that I couldn't help myself but wish that I had written this and I envy you for being such a total genius :) thank you for writing this and I don't regret any moment spent reading it. I think any synlet fan should read this wether they want to or not! :D

Ah-HA! I found it!

Okay, see, the deal is that when I read this the first time some four years ago, I didn't have an account and so I just commented under my name. But I FREAKING LOVED THIS STORY, and a new reader had asked that I recommend some really good fanfics to him, and this one came to mind.

But ... I couldn't find it.

It wasn't in my Favorites, or Alerts, or anything. I looked through all my old reviews, and still couldn't find it. So I've spent the last hour or so combing through the Incredibles file ... AND THERE IT IS! Huzzah! Victory!

Anyway, it is now my very great privilege to add this wonderful, masterful psychodrama to my Favorites list, and send the link to the above-mentioned new reader. Hallelujah!

I like this, but it's very difficult to read.. as are your other stories. Indenting/spacing more would help a lot. Good work so far though!

I adored this story to no end! :)
The idea of Violet infiltrating an underground facility in Russia just to be smacked in the face with painful memories of her past had my attention the whole way. :)
I could tell that you had complete control over every single character, and what they would do in any kind of situation. Having each character act mildly the same until a certain point made it easy for me to identify the climax, and not a single detail was left out. :)
A problem i had with it though was the quantity of words used to describe every little detail. It seemed like i was often derailed from the real story for a paragragh or two, or i was stuck reading a paragragh about someting that was already esablised; making it longer then it needed to be. maybe cut out unecesary information, or cut right to the chase and never look back. :)
Again, a VERY impressive story, and i thank you very much for entertaining me with it! :)

Magnificent story! I had an immensely enjoyable time reading it. Well done!

Best Incredibles Fic I've ever read, ever. Everything... Violet's desperation and strength, Buddy's vivid anger... it was all so real. I'm so glad I spent the time to read this.

This blew my mind.

Wow. Just...wow. I mean, really.

Wow.

Un-freaking-believable. Amazing. Pretty dang awe-inspiring,really.

Just...Wow.

This was an absolutely AMAZING story. It held so much passion and feeling. I'm actually quite speechless right now over how great of a literary piece this is. I know it's been a few years since you wrote this, but would it trouble you to write a sequel? I feel as if there's so much more to tell, and you're the perfect person to tell it. Well I'll be waiting for anything new of yours! Chow!

I really, truly, just love this story. It has left me incapable to really say why I love it, but just know that I think it's amazing.

Wow. This story is a bag of crazy.

I enjoyed the dark and twisty side of it. How the characters were themselves, and very deep. It all seamed very realistic and touching.

Excellent.

(poor Jack-Jack barely getting half a mention in the whole thing, but I guess the story really wasn't about him ...)

Holy crap! :O What happened to her!

Great start btw! ;D