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| irishgirl9 2008-06-27 ch 3, | abuseGreat story! I really enjoyed reading it! I'm a big fan of Flack and Angell! You really gave them great chemistry! |
| AlexKost 2008-04-23 ch 1, | abuseOkay, can I just say that you're awesome? Ever since "Commuted Sentences" I've been... "discretely" obsessed with the Flack/Angell ship, and I never thought that Fanficts would be a way to have fun with the story and ignore the fact that she's not listed as appearing until "Taxi" ((the shark one just aired)). "All in the Family" and "DOA for a Day" suggest that the writers of CSI: NY agree with our assumptions about the CS flirting. All around, I like your style, and I might actually scroll the CSI:NY ficts because of it. |
| cherryspark101 2008-03-26 ch 1, | abuseI LOVED this story! Please write more Flack/Angell storylines!! |
| greyslostwho 2008-03-05 ch 3, | abuseLoved it! There's very little Flack/Angell on here, but this is one of the best I've read... well done. Write more! |
| LocoGreggo 2008-02-29 ch 3, | abuseHaha...this was awesome. Thank you so much. |
| LocoGreggo 2008-02-29 ch 2, | abuse*laughs* Flack...man you got nerve. Wonderful job. |
| marialisa 2008-02-27 ch 3, | abuseWow - nice ending :) Really enjoying this story - sorry to take so long to review. Work! Need I say more? |
| stargazr41 2008-02-21 ch 3, | abuseStill loving it and the idea of F/A. She appears to be a very confidant, sensual character- and Flack's grown into the same. It's sweet that he's terrified of her and what she invokes in him. I love their interactions. You do know you're a tease for ending the last two chapters as you have. ;) -s |
| aeriefaerie 2008-02-19 ch 3, | abuseYay! This chapter was, once again, awesome. To see Flack having to "go slow" and wait for her must have been eating at him. Then Angell dieing hoping that Flack is still interested in her. I love how they dance around eachother in circles both thinking the opposite thing. It's great really. Hopefully now they can finally embark on some kind of relationship. But in the back of mind, I have a feeling that Angell is still going to be still very reserved and cauttious considering her thoughts and actions in the past chapters. I've noticed most Flack and Angell fics (including my own) speak in Angell's point of view. Not that is bad, its just an observation. Anyway I'm excited for the next chapter. Very good job. |
| Aphina 2008-02-19 ch 3, | abuselol if i was ANgell I would have pounced very quickly at him. I laughed like hell at Linds when she said he was scared of her. That kiss at the end was lovely! |
| Aphina 2008-02-19 ch 2, | abuseI loved readnig about how the Ruben case effected Flack, I also like the fact he was surprised by the wya she waited for him. The kiss at the end was intoxicating and sweet. |
| mabelreid 2008-02-19 ch 3, | abuseThis made me laugh. Oh the misunderstandings that happen because people don't talk to each other. “Thank God.” It took him less than a second to cover the distance between them, pulling her to him, his mouth capturing hers in a long, draining kiss that had Jennifer’s heart flipping helplessly in her chest. “Does that answer your question?” “What question was that?” “If I’m still interested.” His lips skimmed over hers one more time. “Got it now?” “Yes.” She linked her arms around his neck. “I’ve got it now.” Thank God for that! Great Chapter, love the emotional shifts in this. I look forward to more |
| Bronte1967 2008-02-19 ch 3, | abuseExactly why I read from this site. Amazing. |
| gwen24 2008-02-19 ch 3, | abuseloved it loved it loved it loved loved it! i really that lindsay and angell are friends that's cool. are you really stopping here? any plans of a sequel? please please please!!;) |
| AllyOz 2008-02-19 ch 3, | abuseBrilliant! I have read a few Angell/Flack fics but they weren't able to capture the character like you did it this fic. Very well written. Please post more soon. |