oh my...that was..very grand. xD it was frikken awesome yo!
pretty pretty please update soon!

...:D
IRITS

This is a completely unnecessary comment but...

"If his pride didn't kill him, it would certainly drive someone else to."
I just lolled so hard at that, at least he recognises his own faults :D

Anyway, really, really interesting first chapter. Now next one..!

hope you update soon!xD

Best alternate Konoha I've read. Wow. I assume next we'll be seeing more of the other ninja yes? I can't wait to see!

It's a great story, i love the plot-line so far, i really can't wait for the next chapter

Yo! Your writing style is really awesome, i enjoy reading whatever you write, apparently. Take that how you will. This actually has a good plot, despite what you said about not expecting much for it. I'm pretty sure that stories you (anyone) write on the side--Therapy fics, I think they're called?--come out really good, because you're writing them for your enjoyment... o.o' Yeah.

whoa... this story is brilliant! it captures and holds my interest
the characters and the dynamic of their fledgling relationship... yeah, just great . i find myself pulled in and impatient to watch it develope. and the setting is very intriguing too-and it feels real somehow... i really can't think of anything i don't like about your fic--

I truly loved this story and and the idea u created. It was a unique approach to a pairing i love. I really wanted to see how you were gonna create the whole rival/ dobe Teme arguments that this pairing is bound to have. Or even the growth of their relationship. Also i wanted to see the universe with yondaime is alive is like for your writing style and creativity. I know this story is most likely dead but if you can ever, if you really bored, just try to write another chapter. Hopefully boredom strikes you soon, thank you for even reading this \.

It's so nice to see a defiant, ukeSasu. Most stories I've read where he bottoms, he acts like such a s*.

I love the entire story overall so far. You draw things out to give the readers the full story, instead of time-skips where they just jump into bed together.

:D
YAYS I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER! I vote for this one! I forgot to vote for it in the poll, *sweatdrop*
I'll be waiting for the next update on this ^^
D.k.-chan

omg this is SO on my favs list!

How come this story isn't on your poll? I think it's awesome and can't wait to read more of it

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it's cute

i suppose that since this isn't an angst sasuke will eventualy fall in love with naruto

it's really nice I like this fic a lot it is sort of sweet the way naruto is so protectively possessive
But some people could take this the wrong way

any way I look fowards to seeing where this goes

blessed be

you haven't updated this story in forever!
i wonder if you'll even continue it?? i hope you do! :]

This is really good! Are you going to finish it? Cuz I think it's really cute how Naruto's obsessed over Sasuke in this one! I just thought, "Aw! Love at first sight!" Too bad Sasuke didn't think the same thing of Naruto.

Beans