 K.S.T.M 2009-11-08 . chapter 2hope you update soon!xD |
 Shinimegami7 2009-11-06 . chapter 2Best alternate Konoha I've read. Wow. I assume next we'll be seeing more of the other ninja yes? I can't wait to see! |
 LovelessXHeartlessXSoulless 2009-10-28 . chapter 2It's a great story, i love the plot-line so far, i really can't wait for the next chapter |
 BlackFireXD13 2009-10-27 . chapter 2Yo! Your writing style is really awesome, i enjoy reading whatever you write, apparently. Take that how you will. This actually has a good plot, despite what you said about not expecting much for it. I'm pretty sure that stories you (anyone) write on the side--Therapy fics, I think they're called?--come out really good, because you're writing them for your enjoyment... o.o' Yeah. |
 beatrix 2009-10-15 . chapter 2 whoa... this story is brilliant! it captures and holds my interest
the characters and the dynamic of their fledgling relationship... yeah, just great . i find myself pulled in and impatient to watch it develope. and the setting is very intriguing too-and it feels real somehow... i really can't think of anything i don't like about your fic-- |
 swordzoro 2009-09-28 . chapter 1I truly loved this story and and the idea u created. It was a unique approach to a pairing i love. I really wanted to see how you were gonna create the whole rival/ dobe Teme arguments that this pairing is bound to have. Or even the growth of their relationship. Also i wanted to see the universe with yondaime is alive is like for your writing style and creativity. I know this story is most likely dead but if you can ever, if you really bored, just try to write another chapter. Hopefully boredom strikes you soon, thank you for even reading this \. |
 DarkNinjaBunneh 2009-09-15 . chapter 2It's so nice to see a defiant, ukeSasu. Most stories I've read where he bottoms, he acts like such a s*.
I love the entire story overall so far. You draw things out to give the readers the full story, instead of time-skips where they just jump into bed together. |
 DemonicKitsune-chan 2009-08-25 . chapter 2:D
YAYS I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER! I vote for this one! I forgot to vote for it in the poll, *sweatdrop*
I'll be waiting for the next update on this ^^
D.k.-chan |
 rannybananny 2009-08-21 . chapter 1omg this is SO on my favs list! |
 Numbing-Pain95 2009-08-20 . chapter 2How come this story isn't on your poll? I think it's awesome and can't wait to read more of it |
 Belle Mort 13 2009-08-02 . chapter 2[smile]
it's cute
i suppose that since this isn't an angst sasuke will eventualy fall in love with naruto
it's really nice I like this fic a lot it is sort of sweet the way naruto is so protectively possessive
But some people could take this the wrong way
any way I look fowards to seeing where this goes
blessed be |
 lydia-chan 2009-07-27 . chapter 2you haven't updated this story in forever!
i wonder if you'll even continue it?? i hope you do! :] |
 passionateartist 2009-07-04 . chapter 2This is really good! Are you going to finish it? Cuz I think it's really cute how Naruto's obsessed over Sasuke in this one! I just thought, "Aw! Love at first sight!" Too bad Sasuke didn't think the same thing of Naruto.
Beans |
 IraInvidiaInvictus 2009-05-21 . chapter 2...are you effing kidding me?! I was ... I was... GAD! NO! ...please update soon. This fic is one of the best I've seen, and it's unique. so please, please don't abandon this. ...or maybe it's up in another site? omg, please update. please... |
 Reese 2009-05-04 . chapter 2 you have a bad habit of not finishing your fics. this is too good not to continue. :) |