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pink kunoichi
2009-10-13 . chapter 3
So is there 4th part??
Theblackroseofkonoha
2009-08-02 . chapter 3
awesome story! I can't wait for the next chapter!
lol, when I saw the words 'orange swirls' i thought this would have tobi in it xD
The Random Ninja
2009-06-27 . chapter 3
Please, update soon. I really want to see where this story goes.
tearsofjoy159
2009-06-15 . chapter 3
this story is good i hope you update cause this is like addicting i spelled that wrong or right i dont care well this is awesome
Binx23
2009-06-09 . chapter 3
I like your story because it deals with the whole Kakashi-becoming-Sasuke's-guardian plot with a different angle. Instead of taking him in directly after the massacre, you made Sasuke suffer 2 years in Oto, beforehand - giving your story an edge, then and there.

My only problems are a few of you grammatical errors and the glaring misuse of the word 'prodigy' in instances where the word should be 'protege' or 'protégé'. And I do believe Sakura's clan symbol is a WHITE circle, not red.

Also, why is Sasuke so hang up about going to Academy? I mean, like he said, he's way above Academy standards. Going through school should be easy for him and he should be able to finish in less than a year. After all, both Itachi AND Kakashi graduated well before their peers. In fact, I think Kakashi became a chunin when he was six! It'll be illogical for Sasuke not to advance just as quickly, what with the severe training he went through. Of course, if the reason why he has to stay for 3 more years is because he is not emotionally ready is used, it'll just be unfair. After all, the two cited individuals were allowed to graduate, and considering their mental states back then, it should seem biased if Sasuke is held back. If anything, the council would want a ninja like him out there to protect Konoha.

Otherwise, your story is pretty good. Ja ne!
Maximum Life
2009-05-25 . chapter 3
I know you haven't updated this in like a year, but you really should. Its a cool story...
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yeah...
Nice work!
Kinuta U.
2009-05-22 . chapter 3
this is an AWESOME STORY!
dancingqueensillystring
2009-04-16 . chapter 3
Awesome. I am really curious to see how team 7 turna out this way. Should be interesting. Please update soon.
Pnkrockninja101
2009-03-08 . chapter 3
This story is very interesting. I don't think I have seen a story like it in my fanfic travels. Keep up the good work!
Uchihablossom0626
2009-03-07 . chapter 3
please mkae another chappie
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Immortality Is Overrated
2009-02-16 . chapter 3
awhh poor sasuke D:
great story you guys!
its really different than the rest
can't wait till the next update!
`nina(:
Little Minamino
2009-01-01 . chapter 3
This is very interesting. I'm kind of wondering why Sakura is giving Naruto the time of day but it suits the story well. Keep up the good work!
789
2008-11-05 . chapter 3
This is really good. Poor Sasuke but Sakura and Naruto were cute at the end. Can't wait for your next chapter!
shole
2008-10-30 . chapter 3
Oh, interesting, I like the concept of Sasuke being tortured. >:D

Sasuke's being all bastardy and emo! *coughwhichmeansmorepentupfrustrationsmutforSakuracough* Oh, spelling mistake : relived > relieved. AND. importante! Isn't the circle on Sakura's dress...white.?? *urk* JENG JENG JENG! Thought orange swirls and red circles has a nice ring to it. orange swirls and white circles. Hmm. XD
Wulfgirl1
2008-10-15 . chapter 2
I luv it!
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