I loved the way Remus backtracked so quickly at the end. Very sweet.

Haha this is really cute, so is the Name Game. (:

Very cute

i love it

“What the…that’s even worse…Lupy??”
“No, silly, I’m Dora. You’re Lupy.”
...
“I always win.”
“Winners sleep on the sofa.”
“I never, ever win at anything, I never have done in my entire life.”
“Thought so.”


Ha ha ha ha ha so funny!

Lol, that was a cute follow-up to the other story about Tonks's nickname. It made me giggle, especially the "winners sleep on the sofa"/"I've never won anything in my whole life" bit. Quite cute!

~Dogstar

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This is hilarious!
You're done a great job!


Reader W.

Loved it.

Very funny. =) I like it a lot.
I think the last line from Remus is a little wrong though. “I never, ever win at anything, I never have done in my entire life.”
I think it should either be 'I never have in my entire life' or 'I never have done so in my entire life'.
Or something like that.

I really liked this and I usually cannot stand dialogue only fics. But you captured the spirit of both and I laughed at the whole Lupy versus loopy debate. And the last bit, with the winner sleeping on the sofa, was funny. All in all, a really enjoyable read!

-honda

I like Tonks revenge and how Remus tricks her into using his name again. The ending was funny!

Okay, after reading "The Name Game", I had to read its sort of sequel. I'll be honest, I liked "The Name Game" better, but this one was, by no means, bad. Again, very cute and funny. I love Remus's line "I never, ever win at anything, I have never done in my entire life", but (and maybe it's just because I'm not reading it right) it seems a bit...off-kilter? if that makes sense. It just seems kind of awkwardly worded with the 'have never done'.
Ah, well, I'm no master of the English language (far from it!) and maybe I'm just speaking nonesense. It was brilliant, in any case, and very nicely done.
Good job,
AA

Because Tonks always wins. ALWAYS.
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:D Short and cute. Lovely :)

Double aww!
Nope, Remus never wins, lol.