that was written extremely well, i waslaughing and simling the whole way :D

I loved it! ^^

So sweet, beautiful, and well-written. Great job on this fic ^^

great writing skill! light fluff can't hurt anyone.

great story, i cant think of much more to say

I liked this fic. I liked how it was written and it was quite humorous. I thought Shizuru was trying to get her to wear something like a frilly pink dress or something. I was not expecting those glasses with the nose and the mustache. I hope you wil write another fic for these two soon ^_^

Aha, I love it. So cute. :]

that's nice. it's always a treat to read a playful, lecherous, but still very lovable shizuru. and it's more special when natsuki is tolerant (to some extent) of this kind of shizuru. hehehe... :)

oh yeah, i think shizuru laughing hard at that magic store was the highlight of the story. shizuru willingly laughing that loud in a public place...real precious. :):):)

peace!

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Hahahhaa so cute.

Don't read this review if you are not read the story as there can be spoilers!


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I really needed some fluffy stuff to read for once, and great stuff it was.

HAHAHAHAHA! Shizuru slapped her with a rubber chicken.. Oh my gawd, I almost fell over laughing when reading all that. So very funny and cute. Adored it.

I think you concluded a few undeniable future problems and wonders between the two would they continue the progression from the show. You also pointed out a few human quirks that definitively can grate on a partners nerves.

So very funny, logical and true in many cases. Wonderful one-shot.

*fav's if for future laughter reference*

I just can't get enough of Shiznat fluffiness. It's like the ultimate cure-all for any ailments.