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TharzZzDunN
2009-09-06 . chapter 7
Fantastic, but here I had thought Ryoga was addicted to video arcades or pachinko, so you got me good on that one!
Hikari Alta
2009-05-27 . chapter 1
Hee hee- loved it! All of the sexual tension in "Ranma 1/2" is such great story fodder. I really like the whole "fly time is my time" idea. Write more of these, please!

HA
Joustingforcancer
2009-04-28 . chapter 7
This...is...awesome! I always thought of Akane as a nasty little freak. Glad to see someone else agrees with me.
moritynz
2009-04-16 . chapter 7
not a fan of ran/akane match ups but this last chapter was amusing
Doomsdaychild
2009-04-15 . chapter 7
I likey... This is probably the best chapter, considering that it was somehow connected to the first chapter and may actually be possible (although I also really loved the Ryoga Meat-eater thing...)


AND I love the Strength of a Horse story. In fact, I can't wait for the next chapter to come out! Why can't an abused, vigorously trained Ranma survive the vicious terrain and survival requirements of Konoha?

WRITE! WRITE! WRITE!
Awlric Hayell
2009-04-14 . chapter 7
Because you must remember: If the story is good. it will get good reviews. If a story is great, Someone out there will hate it for no apparent reason. If a story is epic, That person will tell their friends and they'll hate it for the same reason.
Tuisto
2009-04-14 . chapter 7
Teehee... teehee... Ha...haha... Muwahahah! BUWAHAHAHAHa! *chortle* MUWAHAHAHAHA! Fanfu(kingtastick!

Oh, how I laughed! Good job!
Diablo200030002002
2009-04-14 . chapter 7
Love the altest chapter was really funny and all.
Akane being creative liek that was great.
Hope to read more keep up the great work.
Sungawd Ra
2009-04-14 . chapter 7
Haha... Very nice. Especially since it's from Akane's perspective. We need more perverted Akane fics, I say. This would have been a nice ending, but then we'd be deprived from any more of these. Looking forward to 'em.


On the other note... Strength seems promising, but Ranma seems too... weak? Not as intuitive? I dunno, I haven't read the 2nd one yet. I'll be sure to leave a review once I do.
Guru132
2009-04-14 . chapter 7
interesting story. I like the whole code red thing with the cooking. Anyways the reason why your other story is getting hate mail is that you are writing the story under a ranma archive and you are making ranma seem weaker then most of the ninja. The one thing about Ranma is that no matter what he is up against, he can always improvise it to a win. As he says, Ranma saotome never loses. Also from what I can gather there is a time skip from the manga, which many would think Ranma being even stronger. After all few of the ninja can actually destroy a mountain.
Gemini011
2009-04-14 . chapter 7
In response to "Strength of a Horse" generating a lot of hatemail, I have to admit that your spelling seems to be suffering lately; it seems to me that your work used to be better edited. Perhaps you've been spitting out these goofy stories a little too fast?
Well, whether you take the time to fix those irritating spelling errors or not, I love the stories themselves. Please keep them coming!
Wonderbee31
2009-04-14 . chapter 7
Nice part and a fun read here, with Akane actually plotting, Kasumi showing some spine and things going right and wrong for some folks.
Materia-Blade
2009-04-14 . chapter 7
Hee ** Larious.

Hahahah! Akane using her cooking as a way to attack Ukyo and Shampoo. Embrace her inner freak. This is just funny as hell. I can't wait for another chapter of it, all it's unusual comedy included!

Ja!

MB
Deviate Fish
2009-02-24 . chapter 1
Why can't he just not lose at getting laid with all of them? Since Ranma always wins, he can't lose at that if he set his mind to it.
Netta Sloan
2009-02-12 . chapter 1
This is so sick! I was cracking up laughing the whole time! Awesome job!
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