I like this...
Short, simple, sweet.
A wonderful conclusion to KH2.
I wish I could express the light my heart felt upon reading this... I dearly wish that I could.

Good job.
*nod*

~The Critic, Zoa

This is so sad! Why is everything Akuroku so sad?! It's not even a full page, and I'm crying! I hope everything worked out for them in the end... Why did they have to die?!

The last lines were the best!

You could have just had the last lines as the story.

The simplicity of those lines conjure emotions inside me that make me wish to cry.