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edward4life
2008-02-02
ch 2,
abusenice prologue!
cant wait to c how it all plays out..
KaidaThorn
2008-02-02
ch 2,
abuseOOH, i like this. Please update soon!
FallenxStars
2008-02-01
ch 1,
abuseYES! FINALLY!
SC-Bradley
2008-01-31
ch 1,
abuseCool, continue please.
-SC*
FallenxStars
2008-01-28
ch 10,
abuseLol! I just noticed Skynight's name...

Name: Maypaw (Maydawn)
Age: 7 Moons
Gender: She-cat
Description: Small, light gray tabby she-cat with sapphire blue eyes
Clan: (can't decide, do it for me)
Rank: Med. Cat Apprentice
2nd Rank: (Just in case your first one is unavailable for things like deputies, leaders, etc; i fill who ever comes to me first,first)Apprentice
Family: Dawnpaw (minimum. Don't really feel like making any other cats...Sorry. I'm lazy...)
Mate: Uh...you decide (but more of in a crush form...)
Other: She wanted her Med. Cat name to be after Dawnpaw, her sister.

Name: Dawnpaw (Dawnray)
Age: 7 moons
Gender: She-cat
Description: Light gray tabby she-cat with glittering green eyes and a white underbelly
Clan: (same as Maypaw)
Rank: Apprentice
Family: Maypaw
Mate: (You decide)
Other: Can she be a victim? But, she dies like Brightheart would have, taking up her Warrior name to StarClan.
HayashiOkami
2008-01-26
ch 10,
abuseYay! Can I make one more cat to be a Medicine Cat apprentice? If so,
Name: Ashpaw(Ashear)

Age: 12 moons

Gender: female

Description: ash-grey she-cat, white paws, amber eyes

Clan: CliffClan

Rank: Medicine Cat apprentice

You don't have to use her. I look foward to your story!
KaidaThorn
2008-01-26
ch 10,
abuseYou can put these cats in any Clan you want, but I want at least two in JusticeClan. Any of these cats can be Med. Cats just to let you know. The reason they can be in different Clans is because they were born loners
Name: Silverpaw (Silverwind)
Clan: You choose
Rank: Apprentice
Gender: She-Cat
Description: Beautiful silver she-cat with pale blue eyes
Kin: Nightpaw, Steelpaw, Mousepaw

Name: Nightpaw (Nightwing)
Clan: You choose
Rank: Apprentice
Gender: Tom
Description: Jet black tom with golden eyes
Kin: Steelpaw, Mousepaw, Silverpaw

Name: Steelpaw (Steelfur)
Clan: You choose
Rank: Apprentice
Gender: Tom
Description: Pale silver tom with misty blue eyes
Kin: Mousepaw, Silverpaw, Nightpaw

Name: Mousepaw (Mouseclaw)
Clan: You choose
Rank: Apprentce
Gender:Tom
Description: Dark brown tom with green ees
Kin: Silverpaw, Nightpaw, Steelpaw
HayashiOkami
2008-01-25
ch 9,
abuseYay! You're welcome, I just find it easier to make cats for other people, but not myself. Here's more! (Think your up to making wolves?) You can make any of my cats victims or suspects.

Name: Redpaw (Redstripe)
Age: 11 moons
Gender: male
Description: red-brown tabby tom, light golden eyes, white paws
Clan: CliffClan
Rank: Apprentice
Family: Mother- Fernwail; Father- Pondclaw

Name: Fernwail
Age: 37 moons
Gender: female
Description: red-brown she-cat, black paws, golden eyes
Clan: CliffClan
Rank: Warrior
Family: Son- Redpaw
Mate: Pondclaw

Name: Pondclaw
Age: 38 moons
Gender: male
Description: brown tabby tom, white muzzle, light blue eyes
Clan: CliffClan
Rank: Warrior
Family: Son- Redpaw
Mate: Fernwail

Name: Seariver
Age: 43 moons
Gender: female
Description: white she-cat, grey paws/tail tip, blue eyes
Clan: ForestClan
Rank: Medicine Cat
2nd Rank: Warrior
Family: Brother- Snowear

Name: Snowear
Age: 43 moons
Gender: male
Description: white tom, grey legs/muzzle and chin, green eyes
Clan: ForestClan
Rank: Warrior
Family: Sister- Seariver

Name: Thornhawk
Age: 58 moons
Gender: male
Description: golden-brown tom, black feet, black chest, amber eyes
Clan: ForestClan
Rank: Elder

Name: Goldpaw (Goldfoot)
Age: 13 moons
Gender: female
Description: light brown she-cat, dark ginger feet, white tail-tip, golden eyes
Clan: CliffClan
Rank: Apprentice
FallenxStars
2008-01-25
ch 9,
abuseI have more for you, if you'd like them:

Name: Nightsun

Age: 25 moons

Gender: M

Description: Sleek, black tom with yellow eyes and brown stripes

Clan: ForestClan

Rank: Med. Cat

2nd Rank: (Just in case your first one is unavailable for things like deputies, leaders, etc; i fill who ever comes to me first,first)Warrior

Family: You decide, I guess...

Mate: N/A

Other: Uh...He's friends with my other FC's.

Name: Starbright

Age: 19 moons

Gender: F

Description: White-gray she-cat w/ light brown eyes

Clan: SwampClan

Rank: Med. Cat

2nd Rank: (Just in case your first one is unavailable for things like deputies, leaders, etc; i fill who ever comes to me first,first)Warrior

Family: You decide...

Mate: N/A

Other: She's good friends with Jayleaf, Opalstream, Rainfall, and Crystalnight as well.
HayashiOkami
2008-01-25
ch 8,
abuseThanks for the tigers. Can Sunbeam be Sana's mate and can I make up her kits/cubs?
I hope this isn't too much.

Name: Bluepaw (Bluedawn)
Age: 11 moons
Gender: Female
Description: light grey tabby she-cat, blue eyes and white legs
Clan: CliffClan
Rank: Apprentice
Family: Mother- Dryclaw

Name: Dryclaw
Age: 35 moons
Gender: Female
Description: light grey she-cat, black flecks, blue eyes
Clan: CliffClan
Rank: Warrior
Family: Daughter- Bluepaw
Mate: Gingertalon(deceased)

Name: Glacierfur
Age: 59 moons
Gender: Male
Description: ver dark tabby tom, light grey paws, golden eyes
Clan: PlainsClan
Rank: Elder

Name: Irisopal
Age: 41 moons
Gender: Female
Description: black she-cat, white and grey flecks, green eyes
Clan: PlainsClan
Rank: Deputy
2nd Rank: Warrior
Family: Brother- Darksand

Name: Darksand
Age: 41 moons
Gender: Male
Description: black tom, grey flecks and white paws, golden eyes
Clan: PlainsClan
Rank: Warrior
Family: Sister- Irisopal

Name: Moonjaw
Age: 34 moons
Gender: Male
Description: tortishell tom, gray-blue eyes
Clan: SwampClan
Rank: Medicine Cat
2nd Rank: Warrior
Family: Sister- Dewfang

Name: Dewfang
Age: 34 moons
Gender: female
Description: tortishell and white she-cat, light blue eyes
Clan: SwampClan
Rank: Warrior
Family: Brother- Moonjaw
Mate: Forestmoon

Name: Forestmoon
Age: 35 moons
Gender: male
Description: light brown tabby tom, black paws and green eyes
Clan: SwampClan
Rank: Warrior
Mate: Dewfang
Rimba
2008-01-25
ch 7,
abuseName: Silverlace

Age: 25 moons (2 years, 1 month)

Gender: She-cat

Description: Sleek brown tabby with dark silver stripes around her paws and tail and blue eyes

Clan: PlainsClan

Rank: Med. Cat

2nd Rank: Warrior

Family: Whitethroat of CliffClan (Living), Starpaw of JusticeClan (living), and Bumblenight/bee of SwampClan (Living, yes, his first name is Bumble!)

Mate: N/A

Other: Her family was spread around, because her mom & dad were loners and they didn't want a pack of loners in the same Clan.

Name: Whitethroat

Age: 25 moons

Gender: Tom

Description: Thick silver coat with fluffy tail, with a distinct white patch on his throat and one on his left forepaw

Clan: CliffClan

Rank: Deputy

2nd Rank: Warrior

Family: Silverlace, Starpaw, Bumblenight/bee

Mate: N/A

Other: Same as above

Name: Starpaw

Age: 9 moons

Gender: She-cat

Description: Brown tabby, much like her older sister Silverlace, with star-shaped spots all over her fur and crystal blue eyes

Clan: JusticeClan

Rank: Apprentice

2nd Rank:

Family: Silverlace, Whitethroat, and Bumblenight/bee

Mate: N/A

Other: Same as above, people!

Name: Bumblenight/bee

Age: 25 moons

Gender: Tom

Description: Actually a half-brother to others; small golden tom with black stripes

Clan: SwampClan

Rank: Leader

2nd Rank: Warrior, in which case his name will be Bumblebee.

Family: Silverlace, Whitethroat, and Starpaw

Mate: N/A

Other: Same as above
HayashiOkami
2008-01-25
ch 7,
abuseOk, here's more! By the way, do you think you can make up tigers?
I'll PM you about it later!

Name: Flowerpaw (Flowerflight)
Age: 12 moons
Gender: female
Description: long-furred white she-cat with dark brown patches and black paws, amber eyes
Clan: JusticeClan
Rank: Apprentice/Rookie-Trainee
Family: Mother- Jadewhistle; Father- Talonstripe

Name: Jadewhistle
Age: 44 moons
Gender: female
Description: long furred dark brown she-cat, black tail, green eyes
Clan: JusticeClan
Rank: Queen
Family: Daughter- Flowerpaw
Mate: Talonstripe
Other: Kits(due in a few moons):
Blackkit(Blackjaw)- long-furred black tom, green eyes, white legs
Rubykit(Rubyclaw)- long-furred white she-cat, light and dark brown patches, amber eyes

Name: Talonstripe
Age: 44 moons
Gender: male
Description: long-furred black tom, white paws, amber eyes
Clan: JusticeClan
Rank: Warrior/CSI-Detective
Family: Daughter- Flowerpaw
Mate: Jadewhistle

Name: Birdtalon
Age: 34 moons
Gender: male
Description: black tom, silver paws and flecks, golden eyes
Clan: PlainsClan
Rank: Warrior
Family: Kits- Hopekit, Fawnkit
Mate: Aquadawn

Name: Aquadawn
Age: 33 moons
Gender: female
Description: grey tabby she-cat, black muzzle/chin/tail-tip, blue eyes
Clan: PlainsClan
Rank: Queen
2nd Rank:
Family: Kits- Hopekit, Fawnkit
Mate: Birdtalon

Name: Hopekit(Hopepaw/Hopeheart)
Age: 4 moons
Gender: female
Description: dark grey tabby she-cat, black chest and underbelly, green eeys
Clan: PlainsClan
Rank: Kit
Family: Mother- Aquadawn; Father- Birdtalon; Sister- Fawnkit

Name: Fawnkit (Fawnfur)
Age: 4 moons
Gender: female
Description: very dark grey she-cat, black tail/paws, blue eyes
Clan: PlainsClan
Rank: Kit
Family: Mother- Aquadawn; Father- Birdtalon; Sister- Hopekit
HayashiOkami
2008-01-24
ch 6,
abuseOk, the site's acting weird so all of the cats I typed got deleted. Ok, now to redo some of them.

Name: Eastfur
Age: 55 moons
Gender: male
Description: ver dark brown tom, white paws/muzzle, green eyes
Clan: PlainsClan
Rank: Elder
Family: Sister- Northclaw(dead)

Name: Northlight
Age: 34 moons
Gender: female
Description: light grey she-cat, dark grey flecks, blue eyes
Clan: JusticeClan
Rank: Warrior
Family:
Mate:
Other: Her name's based off of the Northern Lights.
HayashiOkami
2008-01-24
ch 5,
abuseOk, Mountainfur is expecting kits. Her kits will be Flamekit(Flameriver) and Yellowkit(Yellowvine). Flamekit is a light brown tabby tom with silver paws and green eyes. Yellowkit is a silver tabby she-cat with brown legs and blue eyes.

Ok, I'll make up a kit.
Ripplekit(Ripplewater)- light brown she-cat with golden-brown flecks and green eyes

Name: Skystar(Skyfeather)
Age: 49 moons
Gender: female
Description: light grey tabby she-cat, dark grey legs, amber eyes
Clan: CliffClan
Rank: Leader
2nd Rank: Warrior
Family: Greenheart-Mother
Mate: none at the moment

Name: Greenheart
Age: 69 moons
Gender: female
Description: dark grey she-cat, torn ears and scarred muzzle, light green eyes
Clan: CliffClan
Rank: Elder
Family: Daughter-Skystar/Skyfeather
Mate: Coalgrass(deceased)

Wow, I think I'm filling in a Clan by myself. Thanks! I'll let you know if I need help!
HowlingWulf
2008-01-23
ch 1,
abuseName: Sunstar (Sunwhisker)
Age: 48 moons
Gender: she-cat
Description: Medium length golden fur with a white tail tip and amber eyes. Her fur is shaped sorta like a mane around her neck.
Clan: Plainsclan
Rank: Leader
2nd Rank: senior warrior
Family: Foxtail (Brother)
Mate: none

Name: Foxtail
Age: 46 moons
Gender: tom
Description: Red tom with white paws and tail; amber eyes
Clan: Plainsclan
Rank: Senrior warrior
Family: Sunstar (Sister)
Mate: none
Apprentice: Mosspaw

Name: Mosspaw (Mossclaw)
Age: 7 moons
Gender: tom
Description: pure black tom with a snowy white chest. sky Blue eyes
Clan: Plainslcan
Rank: apprentice
Family: dead
Mate: open
Mentor: Foxtail
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